A Laid-Back Concubine in the Inner Palace, Calmly Turning Her Life Around and Sunbathing

Don't pursue reality in fairy tales. This is a good little sweet article. If we pursue reality, based on the appearance of the heroine, she is destined to not have a good end. When she grows up, she will be given to others as playthings by her father, and she will be crushed to death by the rank of official. To be honest, being a concubine in the male protagonist's family, even if she is rejected, is still a good path for her to choose. No matter what era, the beauty card will not end well if it is played alone. The male and female protagonists get along very cutely, and the author's writing style is very good. There are very few articles of this type. After all, it is too easy to be scolded, but I am a bad reader. I like it. My childhood sweetheart is a little yandere. I love it.

I think it's quite good. The story is novel, that is, the gloomy young master himself chose a round, cute and lovely wife. Although I am not very close to my family, I think I can introduce it. After all, it is a novel. Some of the writing is very funny. Maybe my laugh point is low. Anyway, I think the overall story is very popular with me. I like this kind of alternative. I hope the author will not have a plot in the future where we are separated for a few years and then meet each other. Come on! There are currently 93 chapters, but the male and female protagonists are still the same 3 and 6 years old, and there are quite a lot of supporting characters and plots, which makes it feel dragging. I'm a little afraid that this is thousands of chapters. Could you please tell me how many chapters this is? The female protagonist is very cute and lovable, and the male protagonist dotes on her, but after writing so much about the same thing, I felt a little tired of it, and then suddenly it became so small. There are also a lot of troubles for others, and I am reluctant to abandon the article because it is very well written, but just... I hope the author can reply, thank you!

It's quite scary, the story of PUA between the male protagonist and the female protagonist since childhood.

I gave four stars entirely because I like the setting and content of the novel written by this author. I like the relationship between the male and female protagonists. However, this novel has great flaws in its structure, character description, and transitions. Each character appears without any introduction to their identity and age. A person's name often appears suddenly, and no one knows who it is. The transitions are also very poor, always suddenly changing from one scene to another. I thought I missed something because I didn't read the book carefully. If the author can handle these things well, this novel will be a very good novel. After all, the content of the novel is quite good.

The novel is good to read, but you should be clear about the novel and the reality. Just read the novel (I don't mean to say that the novel is bad). Friends should call the police if the male protagonist behaves like this in real life. [Blow a kiss] Let me sigh again, the female protagonist is really, really cute! ! ! ! Ahhhhh!

The author is talented, and it is rare to find an author with such good writing skills on Tomato. But the shortcomings are also obvious. The plot is too slow and the main characters' shining points are not highlighted. Although it is good to write about cute children, the heroine is only cute from beginning to end, which makes people boring after watching it for a long time. Moreover, the writing is too bloated. The author must first understand what is primary and secondary. The narrative development and emotional line of the male and female protagonists are primary, and the life in the back house is secondary. There is too much written about the life in the back house and it is too complicated, which actually covers up the story between the male and female protagonists. This has also resulted in the fact that there are already 100 chapters, but the time span is still as small as the first chapter, and the story develops very slowly. If this continues, this novel really doesn't know how long it will last or when it will be finished, and readers will feel tired. Ps: But I still hope the author will continue writing! The writing is really good! Being able to persist in writing a novel, whether good or bad, will be beneficial to subsequent creations! By the way, please update, I really want to see the male and female protagonists grow up slowly, fall in love, and then fall in love and get married [crying] [shy]

It's so beautiful, so beautiful. How did the author write such an interesting article? I really like the heroine. The heroine is so cute. She is so cute. It makes me want to go back in time and hug her. She is so cute. It's very interesting, but there are too many plots describing other people at the end, so there are very few plots between the male and female protagonists. I don't want this, I hope there are more plots describing the protagonists. It's very interesting, but it's so short. I finished it in a while, and then finished it after reading a little bit. Oops, why didn't the author update it?

It's a really cute and cute book. Feng Chen is so smart that it always makes people feel like he is causing trouble one second, and then realizes that he is guiding everyone's thinking the next. Raise Zhizhi well, his father is your boyfriend, he is more than one level better than his father, he is really awesome

Ordinary daily life, no bloody plot It's a bit like a group portrait, but the plot of Fan Miao is so annoying. It's inexplicable. Author, if you like this kind of plot, start a new story. It has nothing to do with the protagonist. Their plot is much older. It always cuts to their channel suddenly. It makes no sense. The two characters are not well portrayed and thin. I really don't like them as siblings.

Overall, it's pretty good, but there are few opportunities for secondary characters to appear. Occasionally, I can't remember who they are. It would be nice if I could bring a big room or a second room with me, otherwise I won't be able to figure out who the character who suddenly appeared after a long time of thinking about it.