The First Corpse-Raising Official of the Tomb Raider Notes

I feel like I'm in a rush to update my own book.

The overall writing style is good, and the story has a sense of narrative, but it is a bit too short, and the foreshadowing of the brotherhood with the younger brother is a bit too fast, which feels a bit strange. After looking at the homepage, the author is actually a mother! ! ! Very great! ! ! But it may be because of this reason that I am too busy to write. I hope the author will not rush to finish the next book when he publishes it. We can wait!

The fusion is actually quite interesting. It's all an arranged fate. Some of the fragments I wrote gave me a feeling that Ben continued to be pushed forward, and because the two sides met and cooperated, they learned from each other's strengths, gradually saw the layout clearly, and slowly broke free. It's a pity that the update has been discontinued... But at least it gave me an outline and the ending [laughing and crying] I'll give it a five-star souvenir.

Author, please get well soon

The teacher wrote it very well [laughs]

Is the timeline wrong?