Reincarnated as a Debauched Villain: From the Start, I Win Over the Heroine

Author, your book is about to reach its peak. It is already on the recommendation list. If you work hard, you may get a good score [Chigua]

It's not enough to read at all. Suggestion: 5,000 words for each picture. Also, the main character has changed too much. In just a few pictures, the change is so big. It's the relationship between the licking dog and the goddess. In just a few pictures, the relationship between the licking dog and the goddess has become a goddess for nothing (I think it's okay) And if you, the author, plan to write a very large harem story, I hope that everyone has their own characteristics and personality, and the number is not too large. So far, the two are almost the same, but the writing is not very clear. The brave man is okay, but what happened to the one who has been licking for three years? It changed too quickly, right? Also, I am looking forward to the emotional line between the devil and the protagonist. Please author as soon as possible. Of course, it would be better if the transformation from the three-year dog-licking to your goddess can be perfected. I would like to add that the author's scale can be a little smaller, so that he doesn't get blocked just by looking at it. Please take a look and cherish it

Come on, it's rare to see such a Western fantasy work. The control of the main plot and the development of the story are not repetitive, and the development of the story is very attractive. I personally feel that if a more grand world view can be further developed, and some chapters can be used to deeply depict the emotional changes of the characters, the work may be better. (Personal Opinion) After all, although most of the stories on the platform are mainly interesting stories, I think creating some more flesh-and-blood characters will allow people to retain their original intention and motivation to write novels. I think writing is a cumulative process, I wish you all the best.

It's very interesting. Finally, there is a novel where the male protagonist doesn't treat relationship issues like an idiot, and he is also very decisive emotionally. The plot is also very interesting. Although there are not many words now, it is basically out of water.

No, brother, I really like reading these two books. Wouldn't it be better if I could slow down but don't stop? You can see how long I read. I really like it. I almost kept reading this book when I found it [crying] [crying]

I want to be reincarnated like the male protagonist. I would like to ask the author if he should follow the process or just start complaining [laughter]

I can watch it, but the plot progression is slightly lacking. In fact, a normal world view would seem more palatable. If the female protagonist is a Western fantasy, there should be more than just epics of brave men on the continent, there should be more or less powerful female swordsmen, or legends of magisters. How to advance the main storyline after incorporating the dragon? The protagonist's name is also interesting, Dick, 6 [laughing]

I don't understand why the rating is so low. I think it's quite good. I've just read the second volume. I hope the author doesn't finish the third volume and end it. I've been busy lately and haven't had any good novels, so I'll check this one out.

It's okay, but it may be a bit poisonous for some people. For example, the hatred between Anlea and the Golden Dragon. Can she accept Alice? How to deal with the Shura field is written in such a way that it makes people feel that Anlea's hatred is not great, and the handing over of the secret key by Aishilia feels a bit hasty, but overall I feel that it is still OK. I look forward to the next article.

It's a pretty good work, with a good subject matter and good writing style. It doesn't have too many poisonous points. It's not a heroine novel in the traditional sense. This is very good. It's not mainly about the heroine content. The heroine is just a slight component of the world view. This is good. After all, the heroine of Western Fantasy Magic is really hard to stand. I hope the author can continue to keep it up and deepen the description of the character without showing too many poisonous points. Come on!