I'm an Administrator in a Horror Game

The chapters are relatively short and short, but the author felt that the description was too short and lacked a sense of immersion. Some parts of the description are wrong. The heroine is a girl control who will not show mercy to the bullies in school. This is good, but the detailed description of Yuan Yi being bullied is a bit less realistic than the public. The copy of the horror unit does not feel scary, does not have that kind of tension, and is relatively simple. The comedy is quite real, and it is a five-star review. I look forward to the author's strong opening of the new book.

After reading it, I cried for a long time at 1:30 in the morning, and I was really moved in the end [crying] [crying] Yuantong, as the No. 1 Manager, entered many dungeons to make corrections. When she returned to the real world, she had a sister Yuan Yi. The two had a very good relationship. Yuantong was very protective of her sister Yuan Yi, but Yuantong always felt that she had forgotten something. As the number of dungeons entered increased, Yuantong discovered many strange phenomena, and the terminal was trying to win her over. In the last dungeon, Yuantong finally knew everything. The dungeon world and the real world she existed in were both false. All of this was an SSS dungeon. The terminal weaved all these lies just to win over her. Yuantong had passed The NPCs in the dungeon are all allies of the heroine. Their only purpose is to find Yuan Tong's real sister Yuan Yi, and Yuan Yi is the developer of the thriller game. However, someone used the terminal to maliciously keep the player in the dungeon world. Yuan Tong, who remembered everything, destroyed everything in the dungeon at all costs, and finally she found her sister Yuan Yi. When the copy collapses, everyone will return to the real world. The first thing Yuan Yi does after waking up is to look for his sister Yuan Tong, but Yuan Tong can never wake up again. Everyone wakes up, only her sister Yuan Tong does not wake up, and she stays there forever. Yuan Yi spends a few days in a daze and buries his sister. Yuan Yi develops a game that only belongs to him, and she is the only player. Yuan Yi walks into the home in the game, and a familiar voice comes from inside. Yuan Tong is calling Yuan Yi to eat. [Top post][Top post] This is my first time to write a book review. The author's writing style is very delicate, and the twist at the end of the story is something I didn't expect. I think this is a really good article. It can be read in one night with not many words. Maybe it is because there are few readers. The rating of this book is not high. I hope more and more readers will find this article, and I also wish the author's rating of this article will get higher and higher [Top post][Top post][Top post]

As for this book, the subject matter is very novel, with twists and turns, but it lacks a little love and I didn't read enough. The ending gave me a slap in the face. I go, I really, I thought both of them could come out alive, but in the end, alas

There are two endings, but I prefer the heroine, who is actually dead. At the end of the chapter, it is described that the heroine bounced back onto the machine, and seemed to have had a dream, and smiled. Later, the heroine's sister was added. Relatively speaking, the heroine is more likely to be dead.

The characters and plot settings are very good, it's my favorite type, and the twist at the end really surprised me. The parts that I thought were a little strange in the plot were foreshadowing later on. I just felt that the ending was a bit rushed, I didn't respond to it, and it was a bit underwhelming. Overall, it was pretty good.

A short article that can be read in one day. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was a cool article, but it wasn't until I saw it at the back that I realized something was a little bit wrong. As a result, the last few pictures were so cruel to me. (ಥಥ)

It's a very interesting story, the plot is compact and not draggy, the heroine kills decisively, and even the villains are eliminated very quickly. But author, come here, I will ask you what you mean after that. I finally found a cool article in the middle of the night. You hit me with a knife, so I was so caught off guard [crazy] and answered me look in my eyes tell me why baby why

I gave the novel a very high overall rating, and the overall story is also very good. The unexpected reversal in the ending is surprising, and the end is also heart-wrenching.

Don't use too many exclamation points, it will look uncomfortable

It's pretty good so far. I finished it in one go. Looking forward to the follow-up.