Forbidden Love: My Girlfriend Cheated, So I Went on a Killing Spree

"There are trees in the mountains, but the trees have branches, and my heart is happy for you, but you don't know it." In his previous life, Lin Zhi lost all his relationships as Lin Zhi, going around and around, losing and regaining; The moonlight that Lin Zhi had embraced him without knowing anything in this life was fleeting and elusive. "I like Xia Ruyue. She is my lover, and she can only be my lover, not even Lin Zhi in this life. Since I owed her in my previous life, I can only repay her in this life. I will be her lifelong Zhizhi." —— Lin Zhizhi "I seem to have lost something important to me." ——Lin Zhi Lin Zhizhi lost Lin Zhi, and Lin Zhi lost Xia Ruyue.

The content is quite interesting and rare, but in terms of relationship, since I have decided on Lily, I will go with Lily. I won't need to change my marriage or marry myself later. I don't care about anything else.

This heroine's character makes me feel very connected (very similar to my character), and she doesn't have the coquettishness and weakness that other protagonists in transformation novels have, which is very nice.

The plot is quite novel, although the plot is a bit weird, but overall it seems to be surprisingly good, with not many poisonous points, and the writing is quite fluent. I found it a bit exciting. I look forward to the follow-up emotional drama between Zhi Zhi and Ru Yue [please update]

How to put it this way, I personally don't really like articles about other people's girlfriends. If it's the girlfriend before rebirth, that's okay, but the "original body" is still there and they have a good relationship, which I don't like very much. What I don't understand a bit is why you have to hang yourself from a tree and have a foot in other people's relationships. Now that the misunderstanding in the previous life has been resolved, everything is fine, and they are not wrong and love each other very much, then let the troubles of the previous life go with the wind, and "I" will have a better choice. Summary: Putting aside my opinions on the relationship between rebirth and previous lives, this novel is actually quite well written. The character creation did not collapse with the plot, the IQ was always online, and the villain and the people around him were not blindly brainless. Well, that's it, this is an evaluation based on the number of chapters the author has updated so far.

I just spent some time reviewing it from beginning to end. First, I corrected some typos in order to give the readers behind me a better reading experience. By the way, I took a look at the comments left by the treasurers. How can I put it, I am very touched. Most of the comments are pertinent, which shows that my writing is still readable. There are also complaints. I also seriously reflect on it. There are indeed flaws in some places. I can modify it a little bit, but there are some places that affect my whole body, so I have not changed it. But whether it's good or bad, being able to leave a comment means that someone is seriously reading the book I wrote, and that's enough, 🙏 I will try my best to continue the story, just wait...

In fact, from the moment the protagonist is reborn, she is Lin Zhizhi instead of Lin Zhi. Everyone in this world is unique and has value for existence. As for stealing his girlfriend from his previous life, I can only say that everyone has the right to fight for love at all costs. Although Lin Zhizhi used some tricks, Lin Zhi himself could not control his cheating. In Xia Ruyue's words, she saw Lin Zhi clearly in this life in advance. In this life, Lin Zhizhi and Xia Ruyue are going in both directions. Overall, the plot is well written. I hope the author will work hard and don't use any knives in the later plots. It's sweet and good! (Don't go into the past life, the branches of the forest are the branches of the forest)

Support. But there are some places that I think can be improved. 1. Ren Linzhi and Xia Ruyue had a good time, but they were beaten by Zhizhi stick. It felt a bit 🐮. I think that Lin Zhi in this world can be made to be less loyal to his feelings, but this contradicts the previous situation where Xia Ruyue worked for Lin Zhizhi, which puts the cart before the horse. (It can be seen from the back that Lin Zhi is a bit of a scumbag, but just looking at the front is easy to make people run away. Refer to the movie Hello World, the male protagonist and the female protagonist are together, but the male protagonist from outside the world robs the female protagonist. I feel very similar, mainly because the previous processing is not very good, but I will get by) 2. Lin Zhizhi may be offended by Lin Zhi's appearance of one thing but behind the scenes. After all, they are both Lin Zhi, so it would be too unethical to trick the other person. [Thinking] 3. You can intersperse more daily life as appropriate. It seems a bit boring if there are too many commercial and suspense stories. I have been suffering from low blood sugar recently. Give me something sweet. (Looking at the plot that has been updated so far, it seems that it is not very good.) 4. I feel that the system is too invincible. I can weaken it and let the protagonist have more experience. These are purely personal opinions and do not represent those of all readers. Of course, I don't have the keyboard in my hands, so it's up to you to write how you want. [You taste carefully]

The writing is good, and it feels very immersive when I read it. I have read a lot of lily themes, but this is the first one I have written like this. I give you five stars to encourage you. I hope you will be steady and not write too much in the future [eating melon]

What the protagonist does is normal. There is a system in place. If the girl is given to the original owner as some people say, wouldn't it be 🐢?