My Evolution Begins in Ben 10

I'm a long-time reader [I've learned something], I was reading the author's first book, ben10, all the way to the end. I was quite disappointed at the time, although there were a few parts that weren't handled very well, the plot was fine overall.

It looks great, but could you please not portray automation as so weak? Also, have you seen The Young Thing?

Well, what can I say? "Breaking the limit" means unlocking what's already in the gene pool. Only those with the second-highest level can be added. And why doesn't the protagonist, a ghoul, have his own kagune, nor has he been optimized into the strongest ghoul by "breaking the limit"?

Author, I have an idea for you to consider: later on, the main character could switch to a different watch for Hero Fusion, meaning two watches in each hand, and the other hand could switch to the Ultimate Watch. Fusion of two Ultimate Heroes sounds pretty good. Even if you don't use fusion, switching to your favorite watch would be nice, summoning your waifu to fight alongside you.

No need for further explanation, five-star review! By the way, has the author considered my suggestion? Perhaps write a separate book about watch collecting, or give the protagonist's watch a special "watch collecting" function, and add fusion and ultimate evolution capabilities to it? Author, I should have already posted 10 comments, why can't I join your last group yet?

Author, your Ben10 novel is the best I've ever read, and it wasn't abandoned. Few other Ben10 novels are ever finished; they're all sent off after just a few pages. I support you!

It's pretty good, the food source and the little broken table, plus the Crystal Palace, really nice 😏😏😏 and it even broadened my knowledge 🤦🤦 The author didn't include love tables and error tables, I didn't even know these things existed before 🤦 I hope to see more of these kinds of pictures 😏 Zombie watches, love watches, error watches, etc., They feel different when I search for them online and read them in novels 🤦

The protagonist is actually 18 years old, and the race inside the watch has also reached adulthood. Their strength should be much greater than in the first movie; you can refer to the later adult Ben.

It's really good! I especially love Young Matrix, but there are so few books in it, and most of them are on hiatus. This one is really good. I've read all of the author's books. I'm looking forward to the protagonist revealing his kagune in front of the main group. But can you please update more often? I can't get enough! 🙃🙃🙃

While Parasite and Cannibal were added, Parasite mainly served as cannon fodder and didn't have a major plotline, which felt acceptable. As for Cannibal, adding a few more protagonists and antagonists could have made the content more extensive and exciting without becoming too chaotic.