
National Fate: Playing Acheron from the Start, with Huohuo as My Teammate
国运:开局扮演黄泉,队友是藿藿
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- Ongoing
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- 33k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Updated
- 2y ago
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See allAny Good Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction?
[Remember, I'm only collecting Honkai: Star Rail stories. No need to send ones I've posted before, since I've already bookmarked them. Thanks in advance to everyone sharing recommendations!] (A thousand topics to recommend, but this laid-back poster only browses half of them.)
Why Are All the Characters in Honkai: Star Rail Male Now? Are There No Stories With a Female Lead Transmigrating Into a Female Character?
Looking for Stories Where the Honkai: Star Rail Protagonist Is an Emanator of a Star God
It's Been Two Months Since Honkai: Star Rail Launched, and Tomato Novel Only Has One 9-Rated Book?
I want books similar to "Honkai: Star Rail: Starting Out After Being Adopted by Kafka". "Honkai: Star Rail" has been live for 1,440 hours! With billions of users and a hundred thousand authors on our Tomato platform, surely there’s more than one book rated 9 or higher? Please recommend some highly rated ones.
Any Stories That Put miHoYo Characters in National Destiny Arenas? No Roleplay!
I want to read books similar to National Destiny Arena: From the Start, the Finality Herrscher Faces Sukuna. I do not know why, but everything I find is about role-playing. If it is well written, that is one thing, but poorly written stories are downright insulting to the characters! I do not like substitutes. A performer is ultimately not the actual person. Mainly...
Please, Books About Acheron From Honkai: Star Rail!
I want a book similar to All Beasts Attack: Huang Quan's Journey to Bona. Please!
Transmigrate into Forbidden Zones and Livestream While Playing Especially Powerful Characters???
A protagonist who plays dumb while being clever, is cold and unsentimental, and isn't a self-sacrificing saint.
Looking for a National Fortune Story Where the Protagonist Has a Role-Playing Template
A national-destiny story where the protagonist takes on the role of an anime character.
Are There Any Stories Where Characters from miHoYo Participate in National Destiny? (No Rule-Based Horror)
Looking for Honkai: Star Rail + National Destiny or Crossover Anime Novels
National Destiny Games Based on miHoYo Titles
I, Her Majesty, have been suffering from headaches, fever, and dizziness lately. After much deliberation, I realized I need some kind of national luck, like Genshin Impact, to cure me. Please!
Looking for Honkai: Star Rail and Honkai: Star Rail National Destiny Stories
Looking for books like Honkai: Star Rail Live Stream: The Streamer Can Cosplay Anything. No female lead, please. It can have cosplay, with the protagonist playing Honkai: Star Rail characters and then transmigrating into a national-fate setting. Also looking for Honkai: Star Rail stories with no female lead. Preferably featuring Dan Heng - Imbibitor Lunae or Blade. The main thing is NO FEMALE LEAD!!! NO FEMALE LEAD!!!
Looking for Genshin Impact or Honkai: Star Rail Stories About National Fate or Rule-Based Horror
I'd like to read something like "Honkai: Star Rail's National Destiny: Invincible from the Start by Playing Jing Yuan". Ideally, the protagonist plays a character from Star Rail or Genshin Impact. Even better if they can get close to the real character they're playing: Luocha, Blade, Dan Heng • Imbibitor Lunae, Jing Yuan, Wanderer, Zhongli, Alhaitham, Venti...
Please Recommend a Novel About National Destiny Where Someone Plays Furina!
Any Stories About Playing Honkai: Star Rail Characters in a National Destiny Game?
Any Honkai: Star Rail Role-Playing Stories?
Any Stories Where Someone Plays a Honkai: Star Rail Character, Then Transmigrates Into Honkai: Star Rail Through the National Destiny System?
Can We Get Some Roleplaying-and-National-Fate Stories? They Seem to Be Getting More and More Off Topic
Stay on topic. The forum is getting more and more off-topic. Remember, don't give me something that's purely roleplay or purely national destiny. And don't give me something that has nothing to do with either, either. The text is pretty big. If you can't see it, you might want to get your eyes checked.
Any Crossovers Where a Female Character Cosplaying as Someone from Honkai Ends up in Other Anime Worlds, Like Bungo Stray Dogs or Jujutsu Kaisen?
Any Stories About Cosplay and Transmigration, or Playing Genshin Impact or Honkai: Star Rail Characters in Another World?
Preferably something that doesn't make the characters act too out of character, and isn't abandoned mid-serialization.
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Honkai appears in other worlds. The protagonist can be a Herrscher, the Will of Honkai, or anyone else.
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Rules-Based Horror with Genshin Impact and Honkai: Star Rail Roleplay
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Genshin Impact, Preferably with a National-Destiny Roleplay Theme
Female-oriented stories preferred.
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The writing is alright, quite good, but I have some suggestions. The protagonist's fighting spirit is too strong when playing as Huang Quan, and he unlocks skills too quickly. Unless he creates them himself, he can unlock all of Huang Quan's skills very quickly. Also, the role-playing aspect is too fast; honestly, it feels forced and unnecessary.
Keep it up! Learning more about Huang Quan's personality and the plot will greatly improve your writing skills.
A rare book about the Yellow Springs
Author, how could it be so short? No, I finished it in half an hour!
Keep it up. Right now, the protagonist is playing Huang Quan, but you could also create a Huang Quan memory arc, achieving a state where "I am Huang Quan, and Huang Quan is me." It's pretty good now (personal opinion), just don't include too many local characters from the world of national destiny; it feels like there's too much interpersonal stuff and stuff.
It's quite good, and the writing is also good. At least so far, there haven't been any out-of-character (OOC) moments. After all, it's just a character playing Huang Quan, and there will inevitably be some inconsistencies in their image. But overall, it's quite consistent with Huang Quan's image.
First National Fortune + Yellow Springs
I'm going to go crazy from not having any new chapters to read!!!
A very good novel that made my demonic body spin.
Finally, I've found some books about the Underworld! As a fan of the Underworld, I've been suffering so much lately. Finally, I have some Underworld fanfiction that I've been looking for. Good luck to the author!