A Strange Treasure Arrives Every Month: Building a Top Organization from Behind the Scenes

Yes, the writing is very good. At the beginning, I took the girl as my subordinate and trained her. She is a person who likes to kill. I feel like she is the kind of person who can kill the master. Moreover, the protagonist at that time also controlled rare objects and could not guarantee his loyalty. This was a bit poisonous. However, the author later patched it. After the festival, Yunmeng became invincible. And with the golden finger to directly suppress her, there is no need to worry about loyalty. After all, no matter how talented you are, you can't cheat faster than the protagonist.

It feels like Lin Ruoyuan is the protagonist, right? There is almost no chapter without her, and there are constant poisonous points. Moreover, as soon as this woman appeared, I knew I had to accept it. Moreover, the woman I collected in the early stage will probably be used all the way to the finale. If you really have no books to read, then you can read it.

I have just read Chapter 50 and want to comment. This work combines martial arts elements, summoning elements, and behind-the-scenes elements. I haven't seen it yet as to whether it has court intrigues or not, but the first thirty chapters are a bit boring, so you can skip to Chapter 30 to read it. Just take a look at the previous chapters to add worldview and settings. You can also skip it. When you reach Chapter 50, the first climax is over. There are four summoning objects and a trained female subordinate. The summoning objects have a very unique setting, and the protagonist is also very full. He is both ruthless and ruthless, and has a habit of using Huang Liang Yimeng to peek. Haha, in short, it is pretty good so far. I can persist until chapter 30 before I have the desire to read on. It is a bit slow to get started, and I will continue to read. I will comment later. I will give it a five-star first! When I saw the latest chapter, I thought it was a slow start, but it turned out to be very boring, but I could watch it. The design of the strange objects kept me watching, and nothing else. The protagonist in the latest chapter is still in the elixir realm, but with the blessing of various strange objects, the combat power is very awesome, but the realm is still the real elixir... Then it is to form a force, with just a name, a sword-making villa, a reincarnation sect, and then there are only a few people under his command, Lin Ruoyuan, Zhou Right, Yi Tian added humanoid strange objects, and then added the puppets of Snow Disaster... The protagonist has a lot of strange objects, and his subordinates include the Blood Drinking Sword, the Seven-Day Soul Sutra, the Soul-inducing Lamp, and the Soul Seizing Sword. He gave it to others, and he is not a subordinate... Let's say the protagonist is invincible. , The protagonist is still afraid of the imperial court's background, let's say the protagonist is not invincible, and he can kill people beyond the ranks. In short, in my opinion, I can watch it, and I can continue to watch it, but there is nothing that meets my enjoyment. The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it...

I'm going! Very touching! Especially the part where the sword master Ying Huo comes out. It feels like a behind-the-scenes villain flow. The writing and outline are okay. It's so eloquent that it doesn't look like I just wrote my first book. There are also shortcomings. It may be that the realm of the people I meet now is too low, and the sense of boundaries of each realm is not strong. Come on! Follow up! The protagonist's cruelty is like Columbus stepping into the American continent, and the Indians' nightmare begins. The protagonist has almost no emotions or bonds, and he does not treat the indigenous people as equals. Writing this way may be enjoyable, but without the interaction of soul and emotion, it cannot become a classic. Currently it's okay to look at 9 points

Nice. The character design of the protagonist has not collapsed till now, which is amazing. At the same time, although the protagonist of this novel is a mastermind, he does not downplay the protagonist (on the contrary, although he is a mastermind-type protagonist, the other characters are also well written and not brainless. I personally like the setting and world view, it is very interesting. Come on, author! I love watching movies without female protagonists. This is a masterpiece without a female protagonist so far. Moreover, the protagonist has a unique feeling of being transported into the game through the planning of the fourth natural disaster + game dog.

I just hope that the protagonist is not someone who kills people randomly. I often look at it from the perspective of those civilians [face covering]

It's quite nice, but the game background designed by the main character is written too much. At the beginning, it is said that the game is almost finished. As I listen to it, I feel that the game has been around for a long time and I can no longer master it. The more you go on, the more conflicts you get, and the protagonist has no purpose and is a mess.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him, but I was more concerned about Zhuge Liang's 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. The words "Young man are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang" showed Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. Luffy and Ultraman fought against each other for Rem and the whole episode. But Pikachu's skin is indeed too thick. If Yasuo hadn't blocked the 100,000 volts with a wind wall, and then followed it with a steel-cutting flash, this wave of turtle Qigong would have been interrupted. But I care more about Lin Daiyu's words to the Avengers: "Brother Baoyu, are these weirdos wearing leather jackets here to rob the Grand View Garden?", Which shows Lin Daiyu's dissatisfaction with Iron Man flying in the sky and being unable to come down.

Beyond the starting point of tomato, most of the articles are cool! You won't be able to spot the poisonous spots if you don't taste them carefully, and there are almost no major poisonous spots. Keep up the good work! The plot should be precise, and it doesn't matter if there are fewer updates, as long as it remains exciting! Come on

As long as there is a woman, I feel stressed. I don't understand these people now [face covering] The chapters I have read so far are quite good. The content is clear and the ideas are organized. I like this kind of thing.