The Flesh-and-Blood Daoist

So far, it looks okay. There are no major flaws. Of course, there are some minor problems, but they have little impact and do not affect viewing. The author will update soon, and I hope the author will not write any clichés or templates that people can guess at a glance.

We still need to update more authors. How can you manage such a small number of words? How can you update the zombie stream? You update 10,000 words a day. You can write a long novel of about 4 million words. If you maintain your current writing style, how can you reach lv5?

The writing here at Tomato is really good.

It's quite good. It's rare in Tomato where brainless cool articles are rampant. The pacing is okay. Those who are used to reading cool articles may find it a bit sluggish. The cool ones are too gentle. It's hard to get a high score in Tomato. In fact, there are many places that can be written very happily, but the author is a bit restrained. Some skills and talents can be exaggerated, but there is no need to cash them in now anyway.

Very interesting, I like this type of novel

The writing is quite good, but there are few updates. It feels like the author, like the author who wrote the Seventy-two Changes of Earthly Evil, has to travel to other worlds to cultivate immortality, and then travel back again before updating.

I give it 10 out of 10 points 💯. Although it is a strange way to cultivate immortality, it is still orthodox in every aspect. And the gold finger is very reasonable, not ridiculously big. Still unfinished

I love watching this type of movie. The main character, Goldfinger, is very small and basically relies on himself. The plot doesn't have any bad points. I support it with 5 stars.

It looks good, but not many people see it, and the quality is passable. If I don't follow up, it will be very good.

It's beautiful. I got it from the recommendation page. This book will definitely be extraordinary in the future.