Lin Huancheng's physique has been different since he was a child. His parents heard what the Taoist priest said and sent him to a Taoist temple to practice for ten years. However, they never developed a physique that turned into a woman when exposed to cold water and transformed into a man when exposed to hot water... Unexpectedly, his childhood sweetheart was kidnapped by bandits, which started the story of Lin Huancheng's transformation into a woman to save Chen Ruyue, but the prince Yang Yuan saw the appearance after the transformation and fell in love at first sight, and was involved in it...
Reader comments
It's okay, I hope she can change her marriage [laughs evilly] The prince should be tougher
I just recently read the author's book. The mechanism of changing from male to female is quite good. It can be seen that you are trying your best to describe the scenes and characters' emotions in the book, but I personally feel that it is a bit too much. Words such as "like, as if" appear too frequently. After using these words, we can see the scene you want to describe as much as possible, but too many descriptions make it a bit cumbersome (to put it simply, readers will make up the spatial plot by themselves)
It is recommended that the author read other audio novels and have more dialogues and exchanges to describe the artistic conception and scenes at that time. For example, the dialogue guidance method of "The End of Ten Days" is just a humble opinion, haha
I jumped to watch it, but my identity was eventually discovered (betrayed by Qing'er), and on the night of the wedding, I was caught by the prince and thrown into the water.
I can't help but like it. Even though I've written it nearly a hundred times with my knuckles turned [making faces], I've been waiting to see the theme of a man and a woman competing for one. If you like this kind of thing, don't miss it.
Author, if you write like this, you can accept both of them [face covering]
I'm very curious about what the ending is, where the male protagonist is kissed by the prince?
Good book [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss], much faster.
You can divide it into sections
So far so good
When three of us travel together, there must be one who is my teacher.
It's okay, I have the desire to read more
It's so beautiful [blowing kiss] When the prince finally got it in the end, let alone the prince wanting to cry, I even wanted to [cover my face]
The prince loves to cry too much, like a little spoiled wife, so why don't he just change his gender and be with the male protagonist?
I still want to see the follow-up, but it's a pity it's over
It's okay, I hope she can change her marriage [laughs evilly] The prince should be tougher
I just recently read the author's book. The mechanism of changing from male to female is quite good. It can be seen that you are trying your best to describe the scenes and characters' emotions in the book, but I personally feel that it is a bit too much. Words such as "like, as if" appear too frequently. After using these words, we can see the scene you want to describe as much as possible, but too many descriptions make it a bit cumbersome (to put it simply, readers will make up the spatial plot by themselves) It is recommended that the author read other audio novels and have more dialogues and exchanges to describe the artistic conception and scenes at that time. For example, the dialogue guidance method of "The End of Ten Days" is just a humble opinion, haha
I jumped to watch it, but my identity was eventually discovered (betrayed by Qing'er), and on the night of the wedding, I was caught by the prince and thrown into the water.
I can't help but like it. Even though I've written it nearly a hundred times with my knuckles turned [making faces], I've been waiting to see the theme of a man and a woman competing for one. If you like this kind of thing, don't miss it.
Author, if you write like this, you can accept both of them [face covering]
I'm very curious about what the ending is, where the male protagonist is kissed by the prince?
Good book [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss], much faster.
You can divide it into sections
So far so good
When three of us travel together, there must be one who is my teacher.
It's okay, I have the desire to read more
It's so beautiful [blowing kiss] When the prince finally got it in the end, let alone the prince wanting to cry, I even wanted to [cover my face]
The prince loves to cry too much, like a little spoiled wife, so why don't he just change his gender and be with the male protagonist?
I still want to see the follow-up, but it's a pity it's over
Will there be a second part?