Wuxia Crossover: The Rise of an Ordinary Man

This kind of step-by-step improvement is quite nice, especially the addition of Chinese martial arts, which is a bit of a finishing touch.

I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually Yes, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was because I was crying or because it was raining heavily. It could be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just™M Who do you look down on in the next few chapters?

I have only read a few pictures so far, and the writing is relatively smooth. There is not much to say at the beginning. I would like to mention two points: wasp waist describes a woman's thin waist, but today's authors always like to use wasp waist and ape arms to describe men. Also, Qiu Qianren's iron palm is not an iron sand palm. .

It's okay. It would be better if you could bring a map of the world in the book and introduce more about what famous works it is composed of.

There is no system or cheats, but not much. It is mainly based on the world of novels. Treasures of the protagonists of various martial arts novels will also be added. It has a unique upgrade route and a little bit of national martial arts concepts in it. The only cheat is also a unique feature of comprehensive martial arts, understanding various characters! Overall, it's a relatively high-quality comprehensive martial arts novel.

Very good, just keep it steady.

Not bad, the content is okay, quite rich, not brainless

It seems okay so far. Although it's a bit complicated, there's nothing wrong with the overall direction. I don't know why the score is so low.

The author of this book writes well and the plot is clear. It would be better to add some love stories in the article.

The pattern is huge, I hope the author will continue writing it. I just want to say it is in line with public taste. Come on