Boy, Your Love Is the Sea of Stars

It looks good, I like it, a very special Zerg story, the background set by the author is very novel, Lin An is really cute, but the background of 001 has not been revealed yet, I feel that the system is a little useless, and the system can only come back to contact Lin An, but Lin An cannot actively call the system, I hope to see an explanation later, the most important thing is that the author writes more, it is not enough [heartfelt].

It's really good-looking, a rare encounter, except for the previous description of the background and worldview which is a bit too long. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] The setting is novel, the protagonist has ideals and ambitions, and the content is not entirely about love and love [blowing kiss] I really hope the author can update it soon, come on!

Super Invincible is beautiful, the plot is smooth, it mainly talks about the road of growth, and the plot is very realistic. Both the growth plot and the description of the relationship between male and female insects are well-founded. It is a very good reading experience [Love] [Love] [Love]

Good guy, do you have so few comments?

The writing is very good, but the paragraphs are a bit long when introducing the world view at the beginning, but it will be better later. There are so few people reading it, I feel a little uncomfortable not having a single comment for the entire chapter.

Nice looking, very different Zerg writing. I feel like I can't finish it unless it's hundreds of thousands of words, maybe around a million words. After all, the world view and outline are huge. I hope the author can persist until the end. [Working on draft]

A very interesting Zerg novel. The author has his own ideas about the world.

The content is delicate and the story is told eloquently. It is a book worth reading📚

Super nice Zerg text

Very good author, cheers✊