The Sacrificial Supporting Character Gets Confessed to by the Protagonist Squad Again

The super universe is invincible and beautiful! ! Before I read it, I thought it was just a novel that claimed to be an assist but actually turned me into a heartthrob. The protagonist of "Tiantian Shura Field" is a straight man who doesn't understand the style. I didn't expect that the protagonist really only concentrates on training. Although there are some single-arrow male protagonists (and the protagonist is not a single-arrow hero who is more beautiful than the original male protagonist. The protagonist actually does not have a particularly top-notch appearance), but there is no Shura Field plot. The protagonist Zundu loves only cultivation. Most of the plot is about the protagonist's cultivation and growth. Zundu looks good! !

To be honest, the early stage is really amazing, the plot is fast and ups and downs, and the emotional lines between Xiao He and others are delicate, but in the later stage, the plot feels dragging and the main line is slow. Hundreds of chapters have been written for a sea clan line, and many characters have not even appeared in hundreds of chapters. I really like what the teacher wrote, but can the plot rhythm be faster? I really like the interaction between Xiao He and others [Sending Hearts]

The early part was really good, especially the Gulan Secret Realm and Baihua City. It was so good that I watched it no more than three times. However, I started to procrastinate when I got to the Sea Tribe. At that time, I even thought I wouldn't read this book. Later, because I really wanted to see Xiao Xie explode the vest, I continued reading it, but the vest hasn't exploded yet. How can I put it, it's too exciting. I really feel that the plot is very slow, and Qixing has not appeared for too long, which is really disappointing. In some places, the descriptions are too detailed and watery, and the plot cannot continue. It is boring. Only when a relatively interesting plot point suddenly appears can people continue to watch. The protagonist is also a bit too silly, but everyone in the comment section said it was cute, and some characters were also OOC, with too much psychological description. I really like Xiaohe, I hope he is more important in the plot

I picked up this book by accident. The protagonist is the real fisherman, right? I like Xiao Xie very much. It's beautiful. I love reading it.

It's good to watch, and there's nothing toxic about it yet. I'm looking forward to the next plot. The author's writing style is very good, and the protagonist's character is also very good. It hasn't been updated to the emotional line yet, but the previous article has good foreshadowing, but it's a bit short [eating melon]

It's really good, the plot is novel, and the most important thing is that it's not the kind of invincible beauty that makes everyone obsessed with beauty. God knows what it feels like when the protagonist appears and everyone is obsessed with beauty. Most of the book is about the beauty of the protagonist. The person he likes has no soul at all, and the protagonist is also a delicate vase. The protagonist of this book is handsome and handsome. It's really good. He is handsome without exaggeration. He also has a small halo of being a heartthrob and my favorite fantasy theme. The only drawback is that it is too short and not enough to read! ! ! Why don't you let me meet him later, so early in the morning? Halfway through the fun, he saw the shit-yellow Anjian.

MC: I have seen more than 100 pictures so far. Generally speaking, it is okay. The protagonist is well portrayed. He is considered a genius in the article and a kind of double strength. There are not many awkward moments and the characters are vivid. Disadvantages: The writing style needs to be improved, the plot is too protracted, and some details are too focused on, which can easily make people feel bored. Generally speaking, it is still recommended The writing became worse in the later period, and the plot was too protracted. One secret realm required more than 100 chapters. There were many secret realms, but the progress of the main line was slow. The group portrait marginalized the protagonist. The protagonist was slightly OOC and a bit stupid. When describing the group portrait, the protagonist was like an NPC. Only one or two sentences are spoken in order to highlight the kindness of the protagonist. Group portraits are not bad, but ignoring the protagonist for the sake of group portraits often results in losses. After hundreds of photos, the protagonist's cultivation is still stuck in place. Only focusing on describing the supporting characters makes the protagonist's character one-sided and inconsistent with the early stage. The most difficult thing is that in the comment section, stupid, bad, and good things are described as cute. There is still a difference between stupidity and cuteness.

It's very interesting, and it doesn't just tell a love story (to be honest, many of the stories I read before were about two people who just met and then immediately became disgusted with it, which made me feel uncomfortable, and it took several chapters to grind on). I really like the way Xiao Xie works hard. The cold Xiao Xie portrayed by the author is really lifelike and showed up in my mind (drooling). It makes me look handsome. I hope Xiao Xie will be stronger and more sassy! I really, really love it QAQ! ! ! The intricate emotional lines are also awesome, okay? The heartthrob is none other than Xiao Xie~ Looking forward to the author's successive updates❤❤❤

This book really shocked me It is my current spiritual food, and everyone in it has a unique personality. Really, what this author writes is very good. I really felt that Xiao Xie was so beautiful and cool that time in Baihua City, and she poked me like crazy. Really highly recommended

It's okay. The details are perfect and the setting is novel. It's a very relaxing article, but there are many places where the word count is suspected, and the impression is not good. For example, the inexplicable walking around the pillars, every turn of the character's psychological activities must be written out, and every time someone talks about it, I have to sneeze and think to myself why I still catch a cold since I am a monk. In fact, it's not necessary, just be detailed and strategic. And as we get to the back, everyone's characters feel integrated together, and they look alike. There is no clear sense of character design in the early stage. I feel that the most obvious one is Ling Jiaojiao. Her character in the early stages was clearly that of a passionate and domineering young lady, but Ling in the latest chapters. . . . It doesn't feel like her anymore, she just changed her gender. The protagonist Xie is also a very silly and well-behaved kid, but some of the plots don't look innocent and seem silly. I feel that the early plot arrangements are okay, Spider Lady, City of Flowers, are relatively comfortable, but the later ones start to drag out the pace, too slow, many unnecessary details pass through the brain without a trace, which does not help much in shaping the characters but seems very dragging [crying] I will wait and see, if Xiao Xie continues to be stupid, I will forget it. . I like this setting very much