The NPC's Omniscient Author's-Eye View

The writing is alright. I was initially drawn in by the title. There's a comic called "The Omniscient Reader's Perspective," where the protagonist is truly omniscient. Here, the protagonist isn't omniscient; he only knows a portion of the story. As for the plot development, while it follows an infinite flow format, it doesn't actually demonstrate omniscience. The character development, however, is decent.

This is one of the more enjoyable novels I've read on Yangshizi. The plot is very original; at least I couldn't predict where it would go, and I felt happy and had an "Ah, so that's how it is" feeling after reading it. The protagonist seems to be somewhere between good and evil, similar to a character with a chaotic yet kind nature.

The author is clearly a veteran. The pacing is excellent; a careful reader will discover the interconnected plots. It also avoids the common pitfall of many male-oriented novels—excessive romantic entanglements. The interactions with various characters are engaging, and the character development is quite successful. This is a rare gem among Tomato's works.

Trust me, author, as long as you work hard and update frequently, this book will definitely be a hit! The setting of this book is quite interesting, connecting games and real life, which is very novel. At least I haven't read anything like this before. Lin Han's character is also very well-developed. Just like his identity, he is decisive, intelligent, calm, and also very humane and not vulgar.

Personally, I think this is a very good book. Why? First, the author shows signs of being a master of foreshadowing (as evidenced by the repeated mentions of "Happy Birthday" – in a positive sense, of course). And (maybe not, but at least I think) with so many well-known foreshadowing elements, as long as the plot doesn't fall apart, it's bound to be incredibly exciting later on!!

The plot is interesting, the theme is novel (✪▽✪), and the characters are vivid and well-developed, clearly the work of a seasoned author ╭( ･ㅂ･)و. The protagonist acts out of hatred towards himself, making the story incredibly exciting. The author is also very lively. If I had to point out a flaw, it would be that the protagonist now has contact with official sources |･ω･`).

It's amazing! Absolutely fantastic! The author's writing is excellent, the characters are well-developed, and the plot is incredibly engaging. I'm usually quite selective about what I read, but this is the first time I've finished all the chapters because it's just so good! I hope the author continues to do well and doesn't give up halfway through. 🍉👍

I actually wanted to give it four and a half stars because it lacked a certain natural, seamless feel. But if I can't give it five stars, I'll do it to support the author. So far, there aren't any major problems, just some minor flaws that don't affect the reading experience; the overall quality is quite good. I think this book has the potential to be a hit.

The plot is fresh and original, and it's great! 👍

The writing style is a bit amateurish, but the subject matter is really captivating! 👍👍 I hope the author will keep writing and give it a happy ending! 💕💕