The NPC's Omniscient Author's-Eye View

The writing is okay. First of all, I was attracted by the title. There is a comic called Omniscient Reader's Perspective. The protagonist in that comic is truly omniscient. The protagonist here does not have omniscience, he can only know part of it. Then there is the development of the plot. The plot is infinite and does not reflect the effect of omniscience. The character development is pretty good.

It's one of the more comfortable books I've read on Yangshizi. The plot is very novel, at least I can't guess the direction of the plot. And after watching it, I felt very happy and had the feeling of "Ah, so that's it" The protagonist gives me the impression that he is a person between good and evil. Similar to Chaotic Good, the author is very good at describing characters, and can describe the characters' characteristics and personalities in just a few chapters. But the sudden sensation was really unexpected and unexpected. To sum up, this is a novel that I like very much If it doesn't suck and keeps updating, I will add five stars in the future. Now this book has become G. I have to say that the third copy of the main character is really enjoyable to read. I love reading Dian Dian...

The author looks like a veteran at first glance. The rhythm of the book is very good. If you look carefully, you will find that one link is connected with another. It does not have the common problem of most male pornographic novels - sentimentality. The confrontation with various characters is very exciting, and the character creation is relatively successful. This is a rare good book on Tomato

Believe me, the author is great. As long as you work hard and update more, this book will definitely become popular. The setting of this book is still very interesting. Games and life are connected together. It is very novel. At least I have not read anything of this type. Lin Han's character is also very well established. Just like his identity, he is decisive, smart, calm, but also very humane and not vulgar. The other characters were also well drawn, each with their own characteristics, but there was one character that I liked very much that was cut short by the author without showing much performance [crying] But what I like most is the writing style, which always contains some unexpected little humor. Finally, here's a reminder. I really want to see what I write next.

Personally I think this is a very nice book Why do I say that? First of all, the author shows the characteristics of a foreshadowing maniac (this can be seen from the repeated mention of happy birthday (of course it is a compliment)) and (maybe not but at least I think) it is well known that there are so many foreshadowings. As long as it does not collapse in the later stage, it will definitely be super exciting! ! I hope it can come into play. Think about the sudden inspiration of the conjecture being confirmed or seeing the reappearance of an ordinary thing and the words in the vague memory suddenly coincide with each other. Wow, I am excited just thinking about it. (Insert, I vaguely feel that the diary will not be made by the protagonist a long time ago. The diary of No. 77 In the mental hospital or the conjecture of the person in the previous chat group all make me feel like this) Then, I also think the author's writing style is good, but there are a few passages (of course I think) that are very clichéd or over-exerted. However, I'm not a professional, so I won't comment yet. Finally, the author's pacing (in my layman's opinion) is also great! There is nothing in this book that makes me want to quit. I read 84 chapters in one afternoon (why not more? Of course it's because it's too early. Of course, waiting for the flowers to bloom is not a blessing) Okay, this is me. As a completely immature reader, I will evaluate this book with my humble opinion and disrespect. Anyway, I hope this book is a hit! Hehehe, the author must work hard. If nothing happens, I will keep following up for updates.

The plot is interesting and the subject matter is novel (✪▽✪). The characters written by the author are flesh and blood, and you will look like a veteran at first glance╭( ･ㅂ･)و , the protagonist hates himself for doing things, the story is extremely exciting, and the author is lively. If I have to say a shortcoming, it is that the protagonist is now in contact with the official |･ω･｀). Many novels that are in contact with the official will not control the degree well, but the author's writing is very good. In a sense, this shortcoming is also an advantage (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و

It's good-looking. I can only say it's very good-looking. The author's writing style is very good, the characters' personalities are well grasped, and the plot is also very attractive. I am also quite selective in reading books, and this is the first time I have read all the existing chapters, because it is so good! I hope the author will continue to work hard and not abandon the article halfway. [Eating melon][like]

In fact, I wanted to give it four and a half stars, because the whole story still lacks a sense of spontaneity, but if I can't give it, I'll give it five stars, which can be regarded as supporting the author. At present, there are basically no major problems. It can only be said that there are some flaws that do not affect the reading experience. The quality itself is very good. I think this book still has the potential to become popular. It is now on my homepage. I hope it will gradually get better. Generally, the books I post long reviews are ones that I think are of good quality, and I hope the author can keep it up and write more. (Another selfish thought is that I don't know if the character Yuan Lang is based on the character I think of. After all, I think the name is the same and the character characteristics are somewhat similar. I hope he is not a flash in the pan and has more weight [get it])

The plot is novel and not cliche, and it's fun to watch [Like]

The writing style is a bit naive, but the subject matter really appeals to me [Like] [Like] I hope the author can keep writing it and give it a good ending [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]