Zhu Xian: The Qingyun Sword Immortal

For the time being, the writing is pretty good. I'll keep it in my collection.

I have been looking for Zhu Xian fanfics and finally found one. Personally I think it's well written, the author is awesome, keep up the good work! [Praise]

I really wanted to sell my iPad to give you a gift, but the waiter at Haidilao stopped me and said it was for ordering food.

Everything else is fine, I just can't figure out why Cangsong wasn't told. This doesn't mean that the protagonist directly identifies Cangsong or something, but it can be said that he saw the man in black using the Divine Sword and Thunder Control Technique and Master Pu Zhi, both of whom were harmed, and then Cangsong arrived with Qi Hao. Isn't it good to tell the truth? After all, the protagonist has even talked about the blood-devouring bead soul-catching stick and Puzhi teaching the Tianyin Temple skills, so this is not enough, right? What is the use of pine trees? Didn't Cangsong collude with the Demon Cult to attack Qingyun? But Wan Jianyi is still alive! So after talking about it, Daoxuanhui doesn't understand that Cangsong is for Wan Jianyi? ? ?

The best Zhu Xian fanfic I have ever seen [Like] There must be more heroines [punch]

Looks good, I hope it has a single heroine

The level of description is sufficient and the characterization is basically effective. The rest of the supporting characters do not transcend the characteristics of the original characters for the time being. They are definitely not at the 7-point level, at least 8 and above. The disadvantage is that the protagonist currently has no hidden flaws, the frontal buffs are almost full, he has a happy family, is gifted, smart and studious, and respects his teachers. He does not have the flaw of being modest on the outside but crazy on the inside like Zhang Zhiwei, or being too tough for the world like Qiao Feng. The character's personality is not fully developed. The success of Xiao Yan's perfect character is due to the background of the times. Even Tudu after writing Wu Donghui PS said that Lin Dong is more humane than Xiao Yan. Finally... I felt a hint of the harem. To put it bluntly, Zhu Xian's original work is about love. You only started a fanfic on the premise that the original work attracted fans. With such an audience base, you want to force a harem? (After Tian Linger and Qi Hao were disconnected, the harem became vague. Tian Buyi supports Lu Xueqi. This matter is already ambiguous. After Baguio was cheated, she must have gritted her teeth and thought deeply about her. It was easy to fall in love with her, and by the way, she broke up with Zhang Xiaofan. And the maid, maybe she will be transformed into Jin Ping'er who has a lot of roles left? Do Xiaobai and Xiaohuan have any ideas after that? ) No matter what you say, I hope the author will think twice.

This book is the best Zhu Xian fanfic I have ever seen.

It's pretty cool, I hope it's the single heroine Lu Xueqi!

Not bad, the writing in the Zhu Xian fanfic is quite good. Logic is online.