The Nation Takes Me by Storm into the Cultivation World

An interesting battle of science and technology to cultivate fairy tales! I hope the author will write more

This book is well written, good luck to the author I have too much regard for the people of ancient times. I am a grandson in ancient times. If I recruit a few hundred people at random, I can directly destroy a country. Why should I be like a dog? I really don't understand why the wolf is afraid of the tiger.

The subject matter is very good, and it is easy to read. I insisted on reading it to the end. The only shortcoming is that it ends hastily due to the author's experience. It is a pity that it ends suddenly before many things are explained. However, it is quite uncomfortable to watch the ending. It is like a person from a third perspective, melancholy after reading the story of another person's life. His wonderful story is over, but my mediocre life is still going on.

The ending is a bit rushed, but the writing is very good. I read it in one sitting and left a lot of holes unfilled. I read the comments and many people didn't like the protagonist, but I think the author wrote it from the perspective of a very ordinary ordinary person. The protagonist does not have to be Long Aotian, he does not have to be extremely smart, or he does not have to be particularly handsome. An ordinary ordinary person can also be the protagonist. He brought an ordinary person who is not smart to life. I think this novel is very interesting.

The psychological quality of the protagonist needs to be improved urgently

The book is okay, try to write it in a reasonable way. Although it is not enough to read the novel without talking about it, if it is logically reasonable, it will give you the motivation to read on. You can also expand the worldview a little bit, such as other continents and higher levels. But it's best not to write about prehistoric myths, which would be too perverted [smile] Open up the situation and be passionate!

The subject matter is novel. Although the logic is sometimes inconsistent, the protagonist's character and behavior are relatively consistent with his diaosi character. The ending is really emotional. I hope the author will write a few more extra chapters to fill in the gaps. Cheers, author [Like]

I can only say that you should watch it when you are very, very, very, very bored.

The protagonist's level is a bit low, but the plot requires it. This book is really good, with a perfect ending! It's been half a year since I've read a book with a perfect ending! Thank you so much to the author! [Like][Like][Like]

The plot is unconventional and the beginning is just so-so. It was quite exciting after that. Can read the entire book. The ending was a bit rushed. The male protagonist also realistically portrays the lustful nature of men.