I Turned into a Beautiful Girl, but I Just Want to Take It Easy

This book has reached chapter 71. First of all, I will give a brief review as a reader. I have to say that this type of book is the first time I encountered it in Tomato. It is very novel, but it is a bit bland and requires patience to read it. But as far as I'm concerned, I think this book needs improvement. ① The style of the whole book is too light. In the environment of Tomato, many people are relatively impetuous and find it difficult to calm down and read. This should be one of the reasons why there are so few people; ② After reading Chapter 71 from the first chapter in one breath, I feel that there is very little presence and psychological activity of the protagonist in the book. I have a little doubt, is Gu Han the protagonist? [Cover face] ③I feel that the author is too deeply emotionally invested. The whole book has a depressing feeling. If I insist on describing it, it seems a bit autistic. My mood seems to be a lot lower after reading it [laughs awkwardly]. This is because the character's emotions seem not to be handled very well. ④The author also seems to pay too much attention to the readers' opinions, that is, he seems to be too urgent, which is very detrimental to writing. First of all, you are an author, and you should have your own thoughts and ideas. If you follow the readers too much, it may not suit everyone's taste. [Thinking] Next are the advantages of this book. First of all, the subject matter is very novel, and it feels like it can make people calm down and better understand the emotions of the characters. Secondly, the author's writing style is better than most transfigured authors, and the plot is relatively novel and less cliche, and the author is also more positive and active. Then, the update of the entire book is relatively stable. If there is any need for leave, the reader will be informed, so that there will be no worries about how to escape. If there is anything else, I will review it later. Finally, I wish the book's performance will get better and better, and the author's income will get higher and higher. [Sending Hearts]

If you read it as a daily novel, it wouldn't be a big problem, but the emotional lines of each character are not very well written (but I like to read posts). I am very curious about what the chapter "Weaving the Web" is about, and who is Xiaoke? I can count the number of appearances of Xiao Ke on one hand, and I don't think it makes much sense to add this character (in my personal opinion, the author must have a reason for adding this character!) In terms of character design, well... I think the setting of the protagonist is quite interesting. I can only say that this book is too hasty. I can also see that the author also has a lot to write but has to cut off some plots. In short, come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

[Shocked] I discovered something, sister? Cousin? This book has it, the previous book has it, and the last book has it too. The author is obsessed with his cousin [thinking] [laughing]

It's hard to find a book whose setting and protagonist's personality suit my taste. Most of the protagonists who become a hundred are very disdainful. This one is more of a group favorite and a coquettish one, which is relatively rare. The only drawback is that the author is too short. There are also a few suggestions for the author that I hope to see. @ 1. In fact, novels are about long-term profits, especially this niche subject matter. Staring at the data every day, over time, small fluctuations will make your mentality collapse, just like buying stocks. It is recommended that the author can finish writing a small stage before reading/reviewing it. In this case, the plot will not be completely different from the original outline due to half-heartedness caused by various factors. 2. This is a bit subjective. Em... That is, if the introduction says odd or even or multiple, I think the situation of the protagonist should be determined. When I see 1v1 coming and the protagonist is in a situation where he is torn between two people, I feel like shit, no matter what the outcome is. Author, you need to understand that readers will become immersed in the novel as if they are the protagonist, so the process is very important. If the ending of the plot outline is 1v1, but you write the process as a process of two or more women, it will be difficult for readers to substitute, or it will be uncomfortable to substitute, because this is not the process expected after seeing the introduction. This kind of writing is not impossible even if you rely on magic knife to reduce the number of people. It just needs to have a complete outline of the story. Don't change the plot due to poor profits or reviews. Seeing the final ending can sublimate the story. Readers who run away when they see a knife cannot stand the plot of the knife. Don't panic when you see the data dropped, because since you have set the outline like this, you have to expect that your audience will be people who can accept the plot of the knife. In fact, you said in your introduction that it would be good to give readers a vaccination before reading so that they can be mentally prepared.

Isn't it pretty?

I think it looks pretty

Very well written, I read it in one sitting But I feel that the chapters are a bit short, and I still need to improve them.

The setting is obviously very good and the plot is also good😊I can listen to the novel even if I listen to it on Tomato [laughs] Why is no one reading it? [What]

Not bad, good cheers for the author

Let's deduct five stars first [cover face] [cover face]