Genshin Impact: Those Years I Spent as a Brat

The writing is superb! The plot of the game and the world tasks are all intact. It is not a mindless white story where the heroine focuses on love, but a serious career. Occasionally, the heroine exudes the charm of the succubus and saves some knives. The protagonist group laughs and tears during the trip. Regrets will be made up for. Good deeds are rewarded. The heroine is a naughty child but she is not annoying! It can be seen from this that the author's views are very upright, and the story will not destroy the highlights of travelers, characters, and NPCs, which makes up for the regret of many fans not being able to travel with travelers from beginning to end. Both the characters and NPCs in the novel are flesh-and-blood individuals. The most important thing is that the author will also recall and narrate the points in the world plot that we do not understand and forget in a language that we can understand. This is very good. Those who play with Traveler and Paimon are all good friends!

The author's writing style is simply great! I really like Su Dadai's look [blowing kiss]. The plot of Mondstadt is really great, but after reaching Liyue, the plot just goes along. It seems a little boring. The main plot can add a little bit of new ideas. The legendary mission can have a few chapters before and after each country. I prefer to write the previous chapter before writing the legend. Leave a little spoiler, for example, write the beginning of each legendary mission at the end of the chapter, so that readers can guess whose legend it is, which will make it more suspenseful. This is my personal suggestion. You can try to write it or not, it doesn't matter, just treat it as fun [shy] I look forward to the author's next update [blowing kiss] I'm here to follow up on the review~ I really like Su! Although I have been writing for a while, I really read it frequently every once in a while, and every character in the author's writing feels like he has his own thoughts! By the way, I really like the plot of Rice Wife! No matter how many times I have rewatched it, I still particularly like the plot of Ina Wife. The original plot of Ina Wife not only makes people feel novel, but also relatively completes Su's character setting! And the writing style has been greatly improved! I really want to brag! [Please update]

Oh my God, I've been watching it for so long without realizing it. It's really good to watch, and there are very few characters that are OOC. At first, I thought the heroine would have the soft character in most fans, but I didn't expect that the more I read, the more surprised I became. The author writes it very well! Su Qiang also has a heart to protect his friends, and many plot writers have integrated and written it very smoothly. I really like the daily interactions and joys and sorrows of travel between Su and her friends. Many characters in the article are very delicious (?). For me who don't like weak female protagonists in Genshin Impact fanfiction, this is simply a fairy tale! Thank you to the author for the great meal, I will eat it [crying]

For me, there are some weird points. For example, although it is called All Su, there are Ayaka Kamisato, Xiaomiya, and Sora in the heart. Especially the chapters about Ayaka made me uncomfortable. The protagonist Su felt like a background pet, and some of Ayaka's words made people feel uncomfortable. Also, I was a little surprised because of Dain's unrequited love. Everything else is okay, but I think the protagonist Su is still too well-behaved and doesn't really do whatever she wants. Anyway, it's still good-looking and I will continue to follow it.

Author, you are so good-looking, so elegant, so beautiful, with white teeth and red lips, and a sad face, like a hibiscus, graceful and graceful, beautiful and fragrant, petite Exquisite, unparalleled beauty, with picturesque features, delicate features, as beautiful as a crown jade, with a flowery face and moonlight appearance, charming face, bright eyes and white teeth, charming and alluring, charming as a woman, with a coquettish head and eyebrows, as beautiful as a flower and a jade. , Double pupils cut through the water, graceful and graceful, immortal posture and lost appearance, Xiaojiabiyu, beautiful and intelligent, young peach and plum, graceful and graceful, hands like soft jade, beautiful flowers shy of the moon, hibiscus emerging from the water, the beauty of the sky and the beauty of the country , gentle and pleasant, beautiful and moving, noble and cool, more gorgeous than all the other beauties, delicate features, beautiful as a fairy, smart as ice and snow, gentle and pleasant, as beautiful as a fairy, falling geese and sinking fish, closing the moon and shying the orchid-like heart. Bright eyes and bright teeth, pure and pure national color, fragrant like flowers and jade, elegant and graceful, as graceful as a giant, as graceful as a dragon, showing off her beautiful curved eyebrows, plump cheeks, full of spring color, natural beauty, fragrant national color, I still feel pity for my eyebrows, Xiaojia Jasper, apricot face, peach cheeks, warm color, time, greasy face, apricot rain, pear cloud, saliva, jade foam beads, Yan Chi's likes and dislikes The fish sinks and the wild geese fall. It is appropriate to be angry. The distant mountains are full of hibiscus. The afterglow is gorgeous. It is appropriate to be happy. The shoulders are cut into waists as promised. The neck is long and the neck is beautiful. The hair is exposed. The fragrance is fragrant. Moth eyebrows, bright teeth, bright eyes, white teeth, national beauty, heavenly fragrance, charming the country, charming face, beautiful face and moonlight, stunning beauty, natural beauty, wisdom, orchid heart, beautiful appearance, secret fragrance, full sleeves, water hibiscus, sinking fish and wild geese, charming the country, gentle and graceful, thousands of delicate and charming manners, thousands of beautiful and peerless, national beauty, heavenly fragrance, beautiful face, moonlight appearance, bright eyes, bright teeth, light sweep of Emei The elegant and refined skin, the fragrant skin, the elegant and unconventional manners, the graceful wind is flowing, the beauty is stunning in the world, the graceful and elegant goddess is graceful and graceful, like a flower and the moon, the grace is outstanding, the eyes are flowing, the silk is entangled, the steps are swaying, the beauty is like a fairy, the beauty heals the heavenly beings, delicate and elegant, crowning all the beauties, extremely beautiful, the jade bones of the gods, so beautiful and moving, so let's update another chapter!!

Overview: Players Su, Kong, and Paimon form a traveler team, including Count Tuotuo. They focus on an adventure journey of clinging to people, sticking to people, sweeping goods, and doing whatever they want. Good: 1. When I was working on the plot, I wanted to say no to some unreasonable plots. Inazuma's dual perspectives go hand in hand, and it incorporates side plots while advancing the main plot, which is very clever. Count Totuo reminds me of Nata's little earth dragon, that one is super cute. 2. The bonds with the characters in the plot are more numerous and closer than in the game, and there are many plots of giving each other gifts. Make full use of your gaming backpack. However, from a game creation perspective, it would indeed be a bit strange for the protagonist to be too familiar. Plot elements such as following flowers and mandrill-decorated rooms can also be integrated into the game plot to highlight the specialness of the protagonist. 3. Shura Field is well grasped, with only a vague feeling, sweet spots but not too strong. Wendy's Transformation into Wind Crystal Butterfly really impressed me. Awkward: Su is indeed too bearish sometimes, such as stealing the dragon's whiskers that his ancestors shed. But there aren't many, so it's acceptable. Not many changes have been made to the original plot.

It was so good, I was blown away. The protagonist was very easy to relate to, both the male and female characters. I was laughing the whole time, and I was so excited while reading the story. The protagonist is a very cute girl, super funny, super well-behaved, and a super good baby! ! ! ! The relationship with True Lord Liuyun is also very friendly. Seeing this every day makes me feel soft.

I really like the heroine, a husky-like cat, who will start fighting and poking at me whenever we disagree, so I like not to talk nonsense. And she got along very well with Sora and Mandrill.

This is a masterpiece! I hope it doesn't stop updating. I really like this protagonist and it's great that he travels with Sora! 🥳

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah with with with you with this book, update it to the end soon, I want to see the follow-up! ! !