Journeying Through All the Heavens, Starting from Xiaoao

The elder brother is probably tired, but he is so lazy in updating. I am afraid that he is tripped up by another sister, and he is so indifferent. That's all. The elder brother is usually so free and easy. It is the younger brother who seems to be petty. The younger brother knows in his heart that no other younger sister is interesting. In the end, the elder brother has no younger brother in his heart. Anyway, you have other younger sisters who are better at talking than your younger brother. God, I can act coquettishly and make my brother happy. What is the younger brother talking to his elder brother about? It seems that the younger brother is careless. If the older brother thinks that the younger brother is boring, then tomorrow he will meet someone else who is stunning. It is really heartbreaking. The younger brother will probably not survive the day. He has to lie down with his weak body, wipe his face with tears all day long, go on a hunger strike, hoping that the older brother will come back. After connecting to those many small worlds, I immediately lost interest in writing about the Western Elf. When I read the title of "Western", I skip to the chapter. I have been waiting for the update for more than ten days every day. I jump to the second chapter just after reading the title, but I still haven't finished it. For someone like me who works all day to live. For example, I don't even have time to watch Chinese movies and TV series in recent years. I can only read novels occasionally. At least 9.9% Of people know these novels by Jin Yong and Gu Long through movies and TV series. They can still understand them. When writing a Western, I just don't understand the plot. I give up. Goodbye.

Not bad, upgraded the world, became a Taoist ancestor. In these chapters, the elves beg the protagonist to heal their main god. After the protagonist goes, the elves also test the protagonist. Is it the protagonist begging them or the elves begging the protagonist? Lick lick lick

Chapter 116: Persuading people to quit. Tell people your secrets without any reservation to people you meet for the first time. You are also a talent.

Satisfied, very satisfied. The protagonist's character is reasonably set The behavior is consistent with the setting clear goals There are no brains in the setting and there are all kinds of villains who can't die (bonus points) The author has a lot of experience in writing books, and it's not toxic. Insert a bit of funny content (it's not a loss) to keep people from getting tired. The development of the funny plot is very reasonable, and no one is set to collapse. (It's not funny yet, I can only say that Azkaban gets ten points [laughing]) "It's true that I can't understand the review because I didn't see the plot." (No spoilers here~) [laughing evilly]

Damn it, bro, the writing is pretty good. At least I haven't seen a few books on Tomato that are better than yours.

Sure enough, the pattern is different and the levels are different. Praise

This book deserves praise. There are no major problems in story logic or plot, and the plot is particularly good without making readers nauseous.

Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, but about human nature. If you are poor, you can be alone, and if you are successful, you can help the world. From an ordinary person to a world of low-level martial arts, after practicing martial arts, you are not proud and complacent, but you are willing to fall. Instead, you clarify your goal of immortality, achieve it step by step, and be able to help the world and improve the world environment. The unity of knowledge and action. Compared with novels of the same type, the character pattern, behavior, and mentality are far superior. Good luck to the author.

Well written! The plot is ups and downs, fascinating, and very exciting! It's just too little! I hope the author will continue to work hard and write ten times a day. Being a multi-millionaire is not a dream!

It's a wonderful book. I felt that the early chapters were a little less exciting, but towards the end it felt very coherent and exciting. Overall, it feels like a magical book.