Quick Transmigration: A Heartthrob's Love at First Sight

I hope to write more sweet and pampering ones. In every world, the heroine will not have to experience being betrayed and hurt again. I feel very sorry for the heroine. The heroine was killed and her wife preached and was left behind. I hope there can be a world where the heroine can have an easier life. There is no harm or use of betrayal, but only pampering [Chigua]

It looks good, it's perfect, the heroine has a strong aura of being a heartthrob, and the plot design is also very good, but the ending of the plot feels a bit sloppy. The first part of the strange husband ended with a summary of the thoughts of the author and even the heroine. I suggest writing more or adding more extras. There is nothing to say about the writing. Nb, I feel that the author has a bit of Haitang skills. More can be better. I want to watch online dating [shy] please [send my heart]

I finally finished chasing it. It was not easy. The main thing was to review it all the time. I finally discovered that all the novels I like to read are often under review. Sometimes it takes too long and I can't remember the content, so I can only read it again [face covering]. I am exhausted. As an old book fan I said that I was very tired, and I guess it was even more painful for the author. After all, it is not easy to write a novel that everyone likes. Let me talk about the content of the novel. I don't think there is anything wrong with it. It is a heartthrob that I will never tire of, no Virgin, no turning back, many male protagonists, many cars [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

If you love eating, eat more [laugh][laugh][laugh][give heart][give heart][give heart] Some emotional changes may be a bit inexplicable and deliberate, and the foreshadowing and description are not enough. Some worlds feel that the level difference is still a little big (personal feeling) Bart: There is no female competition (emphasis added) (super loud) and many other female characters in it are also super attractive (starry eyes) I like it very much! ! The world background setting is also quite good. The text expressions and the character creation are generally quite good and relatively three-dimensional [send heart][send heart][send heart] Pairing of meat and vegetables [smirk] [snicker] [snicker] (emphasis added) (cough cough)

The idea is very new, but it doesn't seem to be very good at ending. Every story has the beauty of ending suddenly, otherwise it is inexplicable, but it is still very interesting, far better than 95% of the heartthrobs in Persimmon. Xiao Mouse, I just commented very well. The next world is a heroine who is a widow with two children, pretends to be ugly and gets beaten.

I don't allow anyone to disobey you, I don't allow anyone to hinder you, I don't allow anyone to suppress you, I don't allow anyone to restrict you, I don't allow anyone to teach you, I don't allow anyone to scold you, I don't allow anyone to belittle you, I don't allow anyone to criticize you, I don't allow anyone to contradict you, I don't allow anyone to neglect you, I don't allow anyone to disrespect you, I don't allow anyone to criticize you, I don't allow anyone to neglect you. You, I don't allow anyone to treat you poorly. I don't allow anyone to disobey you. I don't allow anyone to hinder you. I don't allow anyone to suppress you. I don't allow anyone to restrict you. I don't allow anyone to teach you. I don't allow anyone to scold you. I don't allow anyone to belittle you. I don't allow anyone to criticize you.

It's okay, but every time the original protagonist is plotted, the heroine changes it when she comes. It's a good read.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's really, really beautiful, ahhhhh, author, come on, come on, come on [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

After reading the end of the first short story, rate it now! The rice is delicious! The male protagonist feels sorry for the man/the story of having a son and carrying on the family line without a child (son). If this is not satisfactory, please leave as soon as possible. (These are the two types I can't understand the most) This is not the place for you to come! From these points of view, why are my wife and I not a perfect match? This feels great! ! ! Jiang Jiang~hehe~Mrs.~Hehe~[love] ... Ah, what's going on! The first story was the most interesting, but then I felt a little constrained... It's all because of the censorship! ! !

Nice! ! The heroine is a super beautiful heartthrob hehe