The Cannon-Fodder Screenwriter Strikes It Rich Across the Stars

It looks good, but could you please write more about the career line? I like the career line better, and then there are the audience's reactions after the show.

It's a bit average. The author actually didn't have much feedback after the show aired. Although in the final summary, it was said that the first film was the heroine, I didn't see that many scenes of the heroine. Then it's time for the big male lead to come along with a secondary female lead, and the scenes will be concentrated. In addition, there is no sexism at all, and male celebrities are easily popular. Why are there so many actresses and we can't just praise women but not men? How to say it? Maybe there are people who like this kind of tune?

When I didn't read the heroine's work, I thought "Gods" was a story about many gods. However, when I read the content of "Gods" in the interstellar world, it was actually "Gods Killing". It doesn't matter that the work is called "Gods", but the content is not about Gods looking for ways to kill gods. It feels like the author thinks he is right all along. It makes my head hurt!

I particularly like the way the screenwriter tells the story in a eloquent way. There could be more career lines. I really don't like to watch the fandom, where you are scolded and scolded. It is a small setback. Every time it is a scolding battle, you will frown when you watch it. There is a feeling of overlapping plots. When you see it, you will understand. It has reached the stage of being scolded by the opposite family and then washed away. It keeps looping and boring. . . [Pouts]

Actually, if I could, I would put it at about 3:5. This novel is just about the entertainment industry wearing an interstellar cloak. I thought the author almost wrote about what the heroine created. But if you really look at it carefully, you will find that about 30% to 40% is about how the stars in the industry make a fool of themselves. It's appropriate. It would be better to reduce the number, and the content created by the female protagonist is a bit monotonous (almost all male and female CPs are be, and they can also write about team friendship, friendship, family relationship, etc.), And they always talk about the gender opposition between men and women. Although it is indeed more realistic, this is a novel. If it is written like this, it will make readers feel very annoyed.

Generally speaking, it's not bad, but the author writes about StarCraft. Some places are very advanced and some are very backward. It doesn't have the feeling that StarCraft is developed. The rice circle is also the same as the modern one, with a sense of fragmentation.

The novel is quite interesting, and the first two scripts of the heroine are also good. The author could use more punctuation marks, and it would be much better to break sentences appropriately. In addition, I personally think there is a bug, which is where Africans and Ouqi are. Does the Interstellar Federation also have this earthling reference?

The writing is very good and the slap in the face is very fast. I can't follow it due to personal reasons. The audience's experience of gaslighting is so suffocating. Just read this. I wish the author a great success and good reviews.

Overall, it's a very good book. In my eyes, all the books that I can read now are good books. However, the relationship between the male protagonist and the male protagonist is a little bit abrupt. It would be fine without the male protagonist.

Good looking (♥∀♥) really a treasured author The heroine's writing is really wonderful. It feels like I have read several short stories, whether it is Zhu Xian, campus novels, or palace battles. It also writes about the audience's perception. I really like this series of novels.