Another World Descends, I Kill My Roommate from the Start and Begin to Devour

This book leaves a lot to be desired. Personally, I think: 1. The plot is relatively slow, and more words are spent describing some specific events. I hope that more non-diegetic narratives can be passed through in one go, which can give readers an impression so that the plot can advance faster. 2. There are some shortcomings in the writing style. Tomato readers should be given more directionality to bring a better reading experience through concise, clear and cool text. 3. The cool points are too exhausted. As a senior Tomato reader, I hope the author can actively correct them and flood me with cool points like a tide. I just want to be happy! Let's briefly describe the advantages: 1. Hmm (nod), not bad.