
Honkai: Star Rail: The Marshal's Younger Brother
星穹铁道:是元帅的弟弟
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 405k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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The concept is good, the writing is decent, the plot is average, and some characters are seriously out of character. It's a book you can read when you're bored, but not suitable for serious reading. Oh no, I have to deduct a star because some of the protagonist's lines left me speechless.
This fanfiction is truly authentic, though it's a bit too heavily modified. Too many things have been changed, and many settings have been altered. But one thing I can say is that this morning I saw the book had just over two thousand readers, and this afternoon it's already at twenty-two thousand! The number of readers has skyrocketed!
Hopefully, things won't turn out like this: I can't beat Hua and I'll get caught and locked up. With the power of the two Memories Destroyer Envoys, the power of the Jianmu tree, and the absorption of 1/3 of the power of one Destruction Envoy, plus the Void Envoy next to me, even if I can't beat him, I can always escape, right? The Star God of Hunting has made his move? ...
It's alright, but there are a few flaws. For example, Fu Xuan's master risked his life to teach her (Fu Xuan's timeline is incorrect), yet here he seems indifferent. Also, Jing Liu and Bai Xian are just best friends and wouldn't betray each other. And the people of Xianzhou have switched to idolizing the protagonist.
When will you be able to write about the Immortal Boat?
You all want to see Hua beat up the male lead, but I'd rather see the male lead beat up Hua! 😳
So, will Yuan turn back into his original form? If he remembers the past, that would be even more hilarious! 😏
It looks pretty good.
I think it should be written like this: When Fu Yuan fought Hua, he was defeated and his demonic energy erupted. At the same time, the Jianmu tree within his body merged with the abundant destiny, and a new Jianmu tree grew directly around the protagonist.
I've read a lot of Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction and romance stories, so the protagonist's personality changes in this book were quite novel to me. The concept and plot are also very clever, and the writing is quite good. Keep it up, author! Continue to produce high-quality Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction!