A Beta? I'm Just Pretending

1. The writing is solid and the plot is not awkward 2. The pace is not very slow, and I quite like this kind of character with a strong character. 3. I feel like there could be more discussion about the live broadcast, and the game could be more descriptive about the audience's reaction. Otherwise, it feels a bit bland. I hope to get a score soon.

It's good-looking. The plot is not procrastinating and the pace is fast. The protagonist Song Qiu comes to the ABO world and is recognized as a beta. He starts out wandering and participates in the military selection. He enters with A-level mental power and grows step by step. He participates in actual combat exercises with a group of friends. At the 60th chapter, his mental power is about to double SS. He broke through women's clothing and made me laugh. I personally like Bai Chi's character. I personally think the writing is very good.

Advantages: Some of the descriptions are delicate, very visual, the story is three-dimensional, there are many foreshadowings, the story is novel and the author's imagination is good Disadvantages: The characters are thin and inconsistent. Articles with such a background should not often ridicule the heroes of the era. "Shameless", as the only S-class officer from such a unique background, was not praised but was scolded as shameless. The description of the character's character is honestly like a child. Summary: Maybe it's just the beginning of writing this type of article, which makes some aspects too one-sided, but overall Tomato is still good. Jiuxing encourages me.

It's good-looking. It's the first time I've watched aob + private design. I feel it's novel.

It's amazing, it's really amazing. This kind of imagination makes your vision broaden and your space expand. They are all college students, and the author is amazing

The plot is relatively short among the ones I have watched, but the world view is very different. It is also my first time to come across wasteland interstellar novels. It is very novel, and the alien species in it are also very good. How can I put it this way? It's just a bedtime storybook. It's not abusive, very sweet, and very reassuring [laughing and crying] [heartfelt] I just have a few suggestions. In fact, it would be better to be more detailed in some places. For example, Mu's psychological journey may be because I read it a little too quickly, but it feels a little lacking. Although the characters are already very fleshed out, I still feel that there is still one missing finishing touch. This may be due to my personal taste in reading. All in all, this book is perfect. But I hope that my future works will be even better!

It's really good-looking, and it attracted me to keep reading, wanting to delve deeper into the secrets, and the emotional connection between the protagonists is also very good (this is especially compared to the inexplicable emotions in a book I read two days ago, haha). And I was quite lucky, and I happened to read it at the same time, hehe (♡˙˙♡) But one thing to say, I think one thing is really thought-provoking: from the perspective of animals, are humans the same as the alien species? Just like the attitude of humans facing alien species in the article. People are always accustomed to the weak and the strong. Today's class and the inner and poor areas in this article are actually similar concepts. They can only desperately try to break through this class and go to a safer place. But in the final analysis, everyone is a failure... Finished reading From the perspective of the aliens, there is no doubt about their grievances. The greedy nature of human beings has been continuously amplified, which has led to catastrophe—— But if we look at it from a human perspective, human beings are endless and continuous, and people will continue to adapt to the environment. Let me talk about something related to the plot: that broken laboratory, because I saw the behavior of many humans at that time, I actually wanted the sacred tree to continue to exist. I also fantasized about whether the two races could be more peaceful, but then I thought about it - in fact, to put it bluntly, aliens and humans are not all the same in the end. There are good and evil, and there will still be that kind of crazy and greedy... (So what happened to Fuling in the end? I have some guesses in my mind, but it must be wrong. This hole must not have been filled.)

Secretly give yourself a score, there are still many shortcomings, you must work hard! (The next book update must not be so slow anymore)

The author is very good and the description is very detailed. And the most important thing is that there is not too much description of the character's appearance. The novels I read before all focused too much on describing appearance. A little description is okay, but too much embellishment will be counterproductive and embarrassing. The plot is smooth and closely connected. The subject matter is very new. I hope the author will grasp the key points of the subject matter and continue to work hard. I will support it greatly.

It tells the story of the male protagonist traveling through the ABO world as an earthling. The cause and effect of the whole story line are clearly explained, and the story is very novel. It's very interesting. The setting is very novel, the characters are well developed, the story has ups and downs, and it won't be boring. The male protagonists have very good personalities, the characters in it are very humane, and the love between the male protagonists is very touching. What's the story? After reading it, I still feel that their lives are not over, but are still going on. I think that if the author writes a longer plot, the plot will be more full, but overall it is a very good book. After all, there are very few novels that I can finish. This kind of novel is really worth reading. The author still has a lot of room for improvement. It's big and cute too.