The Reborn Heroine Is Plotting Against Me, Now That I've Become a Little Girl

A cute and cuddly little girl, as soft as a kitten. A devilishly cunning and alluring loli. A beautiful and naturally lovely loli, like an elf. A loli, as pure and innocent as an angel. It embodies all ideals and aesthetics. Ah, the loli of my imagination... Without even realizing it, I've already been captivated by you. We are lolicon Born for you. We are lolicon, and you are our master.

It's alright. Those criticizing the author, please be kind. First, there aren't any major flaws. Although it's similar to that "Phoenix Overlord" novel, it's been significantly altered. I've already seen three or four similar books on Tomato Books, with a largely similar plot. Consider this a second reading. The author is still a middle school student... I'll give you five stars as encouragement. Tomato Books are like that; they borrow a lot from masterpieces.

The overall impression is actually quite good, but it's a bit old-fashioned. I hope it can have some originality 🍉 (A little bit of drama would actually be great 😏)

It's quite good, but to be honest, this novel is the most ruthless to the villainous female supporting character I've read in the same genre. They really beat her to death. She's already suffered so much, so I don't want to see her easily forgiven just because the female lead regrets and changes when she's going through the "wife-chasing-after-the-crime" phase.

My first four stars. First of all, the plot is cliché but interesting, the characters are well-defined, and the writing is polished. However, there are many typos in the beginning, and the inclusion of side stories in the middle makes it feel somewhat disorganized.

I'd give it a barely passing 5 stars. There are just too many stories like this, but it's definitely a good read. The only thing that really shocked me was that the author is only in middle school! She understood yuri in middle school? I didn't understand yuri at all until I graduated high school, and I only started to understand it in college! 🤦

The content is pretty good, the structure and narration are clear, the character development is slightly lacking, there are some popular themes and some innovations. As for typos, they're not a big problem nowadays and won't affect the reading experience. The main reasons are: 1. Many correct words won't pass censorship, 2. Writing is also very boring, etc. Many books are like this.

A very good book, somewhat similar to the one by Ye Fuli and Ye Zhen, but that book was so bad that I only got to the heartbreaking part near the end. I hope yours isn't the same way. 🙂

It's very well written, and I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future. 👍 (Helpful Tip) Writing novels shouldn't neglect your studies! Hopefully, the author can also work hard on their studies [currently working on a manuscript] 👍

The one with Ye Fuli and Ye Zhen is very similar, but that one is too harsh 🤦, this one is much better and less painful to read. The school section feels better than that one, but the part about the younger sister faking her death isn't as well written as Ye Fuli's. Overall, it's very well written and to my liking. Keep up the good work, author! 😳