The Reborn Heroine Is Plotting Against Me, Now That I've Become a Little Girl

A soft and cute loli like a kitten, The devilishly cunning and seductive loli, A beautiful and natural Lolita like an elf, An angelic, pure and holy loli. A combination of all ideals and beauty, Lolita in fantasy... Inadvertently, I have been impressed by you. We are lolita control, Born for you. We are lolita control and we support you as our master. We are Lolicon, your loyal followers. I sing for you and paint for you, my waist is thin and my legs are thin, even the deer in the forest sigh. Bright eyes and beautiful face, the blue sky and clear moon make me feel ashamed. It's such a real, unadorned dream, Indestructible, our goddess... Show your Lolita ways!! Loli is the root of all female promiscuity. Everything is the will of the universe. Loli is the way to go Let's burn your Loli soul together. Let's close our eyes and imagine Loli's cute face, slightly raised breasts, and tender skin. Pink thighs. Red lips. Petite body. Shining. The faint fragrance on her body and the pure white panties. Hmm~~~~~. You are already impressed. What are you waiting for? Join us now. Please follow me and shout: Loli is so cute~~ Loli is so awesome~~Loli is the way to go Carrying forward Luo Li Dao Di's slogan Use your "words" to preach "truth"!! Use your "body" to realize the "kingly way"!! Use your "hands" to push down "Lori"!! Seize the "future" with your "sincerity"!!

It's okay. Those who criticize the author are merciful. First of all, there is nothing poisonous about it. Although it is very similar to the Feng Aotian book, it has also been changed a lot. I have seen three or four books similar to this one on Tomato. The general plot line is very similar. It is considered a second brush. The author is still a junior high school student. . . . I'll give you five stars as an encouragement. Tomato is like this. There are many books that draw lessons from masterpieces.

The look and feel is actually very good, but it's a bit cliche. I hope to have some innovation of my own [eating melon] (it's actually very good to have some knives [smile])

It's good to read, but to be honest, this novel is the one I've ever seen in the same genre where Reborn is the most ruthless to the female villain. She really beat her to death. It's already so miserable, so I don't want to see the heroine chase her wife in the crematorium just because of the heroine's regrets. I can forgive her easily with the change. I want to see the heroine's heartbreaking feeling of regret, let her regret and despair, let her know how to cherish the person in front of her, and then slowly forgive her step by step, otherwise the female partner will be too miserable and feel unworthy of her.

My first four stars. First of all, there is no need to say much about the plot, it is cliche but interesting, the characters have distinct personalities, and the writing is at its peak. There are a lot of typos in the front, and there are extra chapters in the middle, which gives people a very confusing feeling. It can be seen that the author of the book is writing well, but from an insider's perspective, most of the extras are written at the end, so that readers do not have to turn back and forth when reading the extras. Let's talk about the character issue. When I saw "Ye Yilin pinched Ye Lanlan's neck", a reader's comment hit the nail on the head: "Ye Yilin's love for Ye Lanlan is not love at all, but just the possessiveness of a yandere" (roughly the meaning) Going a little further, the plot after Ye Lanlan's second escape is basically a record of daily life. It's up to you to write the novel as a diary (help me) Overall, it's pretty good. A junior high school student wrote a complete logical circle and it's updated daily. I have to mention a novel that I'm very optimistic about... But it's been discontinued... (Don't spray if you don't like it)

I can barely give it 5 stars, mainly because there are too many settings like this, but this kind of writing is really good-looking. The only thing that shocked me a little is that the author is still in junior high school! I've understood lilies since junior high school. I still didn't understand lilies after I graduated from high school. I just started to understand lilies in college [face covering]

The content is quite wrong, the structural development and narration are also very clear, the character portrayal is slightly lacking, there are hot spots, and there are some innovations. As for the typos, at present, it is not a big problem and does not affect it. The main reasons are 1. Many words are written correctly and cannot pass the review, 2. The code words are also very boring, etc. This is the case with many books. It is recommended to be more innovative. The description of the environment is surprisingly rich and very atmospheric. , The background is also very clear, the plot has ups and downs, and can always be used in the later stage, and it can make waves again. As for the language part, to be honest, it is not embarrassing, because 1. I read it before going to bed, in the dead of night, and 2. Furthermore, this is an imaginary comic world, and many plots are not in line with reality, but they are in line with this imaginary world, so they are reasonable, so there is nothing to say, just look good and that's it, give me a knife. [Laughing][laughing] The Mary Sue in this article is so scary, I worried about Moulan for a few seconds [smile] [smile]

It's a very good book, somewhat similar to the one by Ye Fuli and Ye Zhen, but that book was so addictive that I didn't see the crematorium until the end of the book. Isn't it the same for you [smile]

The writing is very good and I hope the author will work harder in the future [Like] (Tips for love) Don't neglect your studies when writing a novel. I hope the author can also work harder on his studies [Working on the manuscript] [Like]

Similar to Ye Fuli and Ye Zhen, but that one was too sharp [face covering], this one is much better and not so uncomfortable to watch. The part about school was better than that one, but the part about my sister's fake death was not as good as Ye Fuli's part. Overall, the writing was very good and to my liking. Come on, author [shy]