Naruto: A Thousand Night Guys, Crushing Momoshiki Otsutsuki

I appreciate you not following the original plot, but is it really okay for the protagonist not to keep any trump cards? If you teach him everything he knows, won't you be afraid of backstabbing later? Just don't create a father for yourself when the time comes. I haven't read it yet, I'll make a detailed evaluation when the time comes.

Very creative, develop your own ninjutsu Don't follow the original plot, Goug out Obito's newly opened eyes, beat the senior class, I don't care about the original plot at all.

Your writing is good, but you have to be cautious. Aren't you afraid of being stabbed?

The pinnacle of fan fiction The characterization is penetrating Unprecedented plot design [laughing evilly][you taste it carefully][like]

Okay, but the ending is a bit rushed

It's good to watch, but the author doesn't seem to have written the protagonist's goal from beginning to end and why he became stronger.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's a pleasure to watch and doesn't drag you out.

The idea is really good. It's just that the plot is too bland.

Not infinite self-destruction, infinite resurrection