Help, I Need a Favor in the Martial World!!

Well written. In order to prevent some people from recommending this book among the "big heroine stories" and misunderstanding some readers who want to read heroine stories, I have seen the latest chapter and can make it clear: this is a group portrait story, not a story about a big heroine without cp, and the only intelligent character with the title of "big boss" is a male. Although each story is more or less exciting, and the characters are portrayed in different styles, there is still a vague feeling that "strong women are stronger than men", and the number of genders in the protagonist group is indeed uneven. As a group portrait, it is good, but it is by no means a female protagonist. After reading some of the later updates, I can only say that if you read it as a story about a heroine, you will be disappointed. Sisters who love heroines should leave after reading the first story. I don't know where the brave and scheming heroine is, or if she has been tricked into the book.

It's good-looking. Apart from the few flaws, several protagonists have a story line, and I look forward to the follow-up development. The author's imagination is really great, and the logic of the story is also very good. The point that Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, but about human relationships is particularly interesting.

It looks really good, and the knife is also a real knife. I laughed so happily in the front, but I cried so much in the back that I broke down. Listening to the snow extra episode made me cry to death, Xiao Gu ahhhh! Death Soldier and Xiao Gu are the only ones that made me burst into tears What the author wrote is really very real. This is the true reflection of the time traveler after traveling to another world and struggling to survive. Unlike in some articles, once you travel through time, you know everything and can build anything. Everyone has to figure it out on their own. No cp group portrait and high writing skills! Everyone has a very distinct personality and image I don't understand. There is indeed something wrong with the article. We didn't criticize it and the tone was fine. We just pointed out the contradictions in the article and hoped that the article could be revised. But why did we just disband the fan group? ? Escape? We didn't argue, we just discussed what was unreasonable, and everyone had a good attitude. So I really don't understand your actions. You have supported this book for several months, promoted it everywhere, and even wrote tens of thousands of words for AiDian. Your actions are really chilling!

It's really great. It's a really great group portrait. Huaihan (the orphan) is outspoken and likes to overcome all obstacles with one force. The police officer (the orphan) looks cold but actually loves to worry the most. Although No. 1 (Gu Jiu) is unreliable, he will always do earth-shattering things unexpectedly. (The protagonist of Dihua flow), although the dead man is a non-chief, he is either on the run or surviving in the wilderness, but fortunately he has the support of his partners, including the newly added boss named "Big Boss" (the boss is a real boss). He looks crazy, but in fact The scheming prince, the official lady who single-handedly supported the reputation of traveler literature but could not escape the fate of being a social beast, the very European and cute girl No. 8, And the "minor" Xiao Jiu who was cared for by his friends and found himself little by little, there are The smart and cautious No. 10, Shangguan Lian who longs for freedom and hopes that her sisters can be safe, Lian Er who inherits Shangguan Lian's will, Huai Shuang who is sober and caring for her sister, Wen Qingzhu who has been immersed in guilt for many years... Everyone has flesh and blood and highlights. If there is anything bad about this article, it is that the author is not quick to update it, but good works must be polished carefully.

A very good book, I really like Shangguanlian! ! The plot of the first volume and the relationship between the characters are very interesting and left a deep impression on me. Everyone was happy and playing together. By the end, the whole story was sublimated. They are all cute and adorable babies. Personally, I felt that the second volume was really not good. I read a little bit and then stopped reading. The new characters were really unlikable, and there wasn't much plot for the dead man and the storyteller (I read the author's words), and I wasn't interested in getting to know the new characters. The second volume gave me the feeling that this article was going to become a unit article, and it was only told from Huaihan's perspective. To sum up, the first volume is really perfect! ! There has never been a book that shocked me so much. The introduction of new characters in the second volume was quite disgusting (?) And it seems that the author meant that the second volume should focus on writing new characters. Maybe it is because I am more extreme and I really don't like the addition of new characters (so I stopped reading the second volume after reading more than half of it). Let me tell you, the first volume is a true god! ! Strong amway (bixin

After reading the first volume, I can't help but give it a five-star review. The characters are really well created. Everyone is real and vivid, and their personalities have contrasts and reversals. I originally thought that Huai Shuangyi was a soft and weak girl, but she actually saw that Huaihan was not the original sister a long time ago. She said, "Sister A doesn't know anything and can run to a wider world." She has to bear the hatred of her parents alone. She knows that A Jie is not A Jie. She should not bear this hatred, and she is not willing to bear it. Such a weak girl, she was still only a few years old, but she could go to the Demon Cult out of hatred. I originally thought that Xiao Muling was a silly sweet girl who liked An Yizhi, a scheming girl, and the original heroine in countless routines. But she lurked here to bring down An Yizhi, and she planned every step to avenge her parents and eliminate demons. In order to get revenge, she separated from her brother and went to the Demon Sect. Huaishuang separated from her sister in order to avenge and went to the Demon Sect. They are both the same people. I originally thought that Shangguan Lian was an infatuated dead man who fell in love with the young master in the traditional way. Because of An Yi's ridiculous charity, he regarded An Yi as the light in his heart, but it was never the case. She was superb, cold, arrogant and flamboyant. She could have escaped from the prison long ago, but she didn't. She said that there are people she cares about here. There are junior sisters she cares about, and there are many dead soldiers she cares about. These dead soldiers should also live like human beings. Her wish has never been to get the young master, and she has never been a lover. She wants a broader world, and wants to lead these people out of the cage together. She is not a dead soldier, but a normal person. She is the Lotus in the Fire. She wants to use her final death to awaken the human will of these dead soldiers. The regret to make up for it has never been love. She just wants to walk out of the cage with her junior sister and take a slow walk in the sun together. She wants to take a man with strong martial arts skills but a dull heart to leave Huashan. Unfortunately, she can't do it. She wants to save him until her death. Unfortunately, no one knows about each other's happiness. The dead man's final desperate fight, Huaihan finally used Shangguanlian to kill the enemy even if he spent all his image points, the orphan tried his best to collect intelligence, the storyteller asked not for revenge when he died, but to find the orphan. This two-way rush, this true love in the world in a desperate situation. Each of them has flesh and blood, fighting for their ideals, and even though it is so difficult, they still do not give up. Even though it hurts so much, faith still shines in my heart. The main plot is obviously so sad, but they are so optimistic. The daily gags become the sharp daggers that stab the readers in the end. The comedy is filled with uncontrollable sadness, and the sadness is accompanied by extremely strong hope. When Lian Er was in despair, when she was about to be killed by Yong Chengzi, she saw - the sword light broke through the already extremely decayed door, and Feng Xue squeezed into the house desperately. It was Huaihan who disguised himself as Shangguanlian and risked his life to save her. Yongchengzi asked who Huaihan was, and she said that it was the ghost of Shangguanlian who turned into a ghost and came to demand his life. She said this—— "Her soul is filled with anger and resentment, and she doesn't want to see you waiting to cause harm to the world and play tricks on others. If she doesn't hear the call of the King of Hell or the hook of gods and ghosts, three souls will leave the underworld, seven souls will break through the netherworld, turn into evil ghosts and return to the mortal world, and come to seek life!" Yongchengzi died, Huaihan returned to her original appearance and was dying. She was only a few years old child at this time. She fell in the wilderness, longing for someone to save her. She could save others, but she could not save herself. She was in a coma for two months. When she woke up, she saw her sister in the white light for the first time. Huai Shuang said that she was not her sister. But how could Huai Shuang deny her sister? She just didn't want to be a drag anymore. "Her sister is unparalleled in the world and invincible. Even the leader of the martial arts league is worthy of it." What touches me very much is that the feelings in this novel are so sincere and run in both directions. This has always been the case and has never changed.

I have finished reading the first volume. I would like to call it Tomato's most gratifying and Jianghu novels. It is 10,000 times better than the otherworldly immortality novels on the list that are labeled as Jianghu novels and write about different levels of combat power. In this book, I can see the chivalrous righteousness of Jianghu people. Although it is a group portrait novel, the protagonist is... The characters are more three-dimensional and full-bodied, and the writing is much better than some of the high-scoring books written by men. It is rare that I can calm down and comment on a good article that I highly recommend. I don't comment on the writing. Everyone has their own preferences in this thing. The plot throws away the minor flaws, and it can be said to be the existence of a god.

It's really good to watch. I was still reading it at night when I was very sleepy. The cat outside was meowing like a child crying. I felt creepy while watching it. I felt that every sentence was carefully thought out. This is not what a novice can write! I will consider buying physical books whenever they come out (this poor person never buys physical books about the development of online novels) "Unbalanced male-female ratio": Life or death, gender is not important to them at all, and there is no love line. If you don't get married or have children, you can choose which gender you love. Number 5 has been lost, and number 1 has an unknown species. Maybe they will all forget their original selves in the future. I also hope that our world will be full of asexual people. "Strong women are stronger than men": It is true that No. 6 Is smarter, but the heroine is responsible for force. The heroine is not written as a brave and foolhardy martial arts idiot, but ten years later, she can use force to solve most minor troubles. She also has partners and smart people she can trust. She can take off some baggage. Otherwise, will the heroine die of exhaustion? ! The calligraphy and ink are also responsible for the writing. In fact, each has its own merits. Even if the author has really experienced these things, the author cannot completely create a character. "Disbanding the fan group": Although I did not participate, the author said that he is a novice in writing novels, and it is true that he cannot handle it well, but no one is perfect, and maybe he does not want to be affected by the outside world. For now, gender in this context is meaningless. This is their story, not the story of the heroine alone. If everything has to be about female heroes, then just call it "The Biography of Chu Huaihan"

This is the first time I see such a beautiful group portrait. Oh my gosh. The quarrels in the forum at the beginning made me laugh. Later when I saw them helping each other, I almost cried. [I almost cried]. They are all a good group of people. I really like their characters, their joyful grudges in the world, and their persistent righteousness in their hearts. . Come on, teacher! ! Very well written! ! So cool! ! I saved so many chapters because of school and finally tied up with the first volume hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha (^ω^) It will be fun to read the next volume when it is finished (*^ω^*) It's so beautiful. Author, I will support you forever. Hahahahahahahahahahaha. I found the treasure. I just love reading this kind of writing. Jie Jie Jie. Come on, code! ! ! ↖(^ω^)↗

The plot and character settings are pretty good, but it's all about knives. If you're mentally weak, don't watch it. It's easy to get depressed. I went into it because of the cheerfulness in the introduction, but I was almost fooled by the knife. It's all about struggle, pain, blood and tears, hatred for the world, and I can't be happy at all 🤕