Villain: I Am the Eternal Number One Mastermind

I like the character design, there are some flaws, but it's not a big problem. I would like to give you some advice. When writing about a villain, the first thing to do is the character. The first 200,000 words are already quite obvious. Don't overwrite it later. The second is the world view. It is indeed necessary to write the routines of various protagonists, but it needs to be integrated into your own world view to develop and give us a sense of satisfaction. For example, Gu Changge also writes the routines of various protagonists, but he has his own unique world view, such as the real place, the demon lord's vest, Daitian, and Futian. These words are used throughout the whole text, that is, every plot development has a way to unlock the real place. The meaning of the mystery is that I really want to read it. Although the book is about eunuchs [eating melons] [eating melons] and also describes the relationship with the heroine, the author can spend more pen and ink. There are too few emotional scenes. Regardless of the protagonist or the supporting role, it is best to intersperse the writing with loyalty, betrayal, family affection, love, conspiracy, etc. I think these are all elements that enrich a book and can be written about them all. I do like to read villain stories, and the author's book is indeed very good. I like to read it. I typed so many words to give the author some ideas from the perspective of a reader. I hope the author can earn income from writing the book, and I can enjoy reading it. That's it. Updates are very slow, with less than 30 chapters in a month.

The villain story is pretty good, but the protagonist is not like the villains in other villain stories. He actually practices magic [smirk] [snicker] [snicker] I feel a little dizzy after reading too much

The writing is pretty good, nothing bad about it. I just hope to increase the strength of the heroine. This will make the heroine appear more useful. Secondly, the level of the original Children of Destiny can be slightly improved. In fact, there is no need to completely write Destiny's Child as a villain. In fact, it can be more decent and write more details, but the concept is different. It will also be more comfortable.

The book is more than ten years old. It is a good read. The rating can be 8.5+. It may suffer from the serialization. There are few foreshadowing hooks in the front. The writing style and plot are not very special. If it is finished, I will read it all the way. If it is serialized, I will lose interest after a few days.

The character creation is very good. I have read many villain stories, and this one should be ranked in the top three. The protagonist is not a virgin, has a plan, and is not brainless. I like this type very much. Gu Changge's comics are updated too slowly. Reading this book can just fill the gap [shy]

It's quite good-looking. It's much better than the fixed formulas of other villain novels at the moment, but I hope there will be less female protagonists. Suddenly a female protagonist in front of me came out. I can't even remember what she did. She was talking about Luo Wei [pouts] [pouts] The author should update quickly, update a few more chapters every day, and write a little more in each chapter, otherwise where will the readers come from?

It feels pretty good. The world view is grand, the plot is sinister, and there are many female protagonists. It satisfies my preferences. Although there are some shortcomings, it is in line with the villain novels in my heart. I highly recommend it. Let me emphasize that I am not a bastard

The writing is really good, the structure is clear, the logic is clear, the emotions of the protagonist and the overall story line are also very clear. Mainly because it's fun! ! ! So far, I haven't encountered any bad points. The character of the protagonist is very consistent with psychological expectations. I haven't encountered such a good book in a long time! ! ! Come on, author! To be honest, I have rarely seen such a high-quality book on Tomato! ! ! It's great, and it meets the original expectations for the protagonist and the book's characters! ! ! I hope the author can update it soon, I can't finish it, I can't finish it at all! ! ! I like this feeling of invincibility where the protagonist is strategizing and winning thousands of miles away! The author's writing style is so strong, I hope you will update quickly [shy]

It's been a long time since I've had a book that kept me reading. This one is pretty good.

It's really good-looking. It's about the same pace as Lu Wuchen's book. It's one of the best among villain stories. The male protagonist kills decisively without procrastinating, and he's not a Teddy who just accepts girls when he sees them. All in all, it's very good-looking. Come on, the author, make sure you finish the book and don't end it [blowing kiss]