Keep That Cursed Sorcery Away from Me

Let me talk about the bad points first 1. The front line is very long when your body is taken away and you can only be used as a rat or something. I don't like this kind of thing very much. 2. Sometimes the writing is too bt. For example, after Satoru kissed the main character, he kissed Jie again and went on to express the sandwiched main character. This drama is really difficult to review and it is very exciting. 3. For the emotional line, sometimes I really feel that the character's behavior, mentality, etc. Are too outrageous. It's a bit OOC to me, but everyone's character analysis is different. I don't criticize or anything, just express my feelings. 4. The protagonist feels a bit too strong, but sometimes he is a bit inexplicably weak. 5. Comprehensive comics, but a bit messy Let's talk about it again 1. To put it simply, it is more fun and interesting. You can watch it to relax the literary wilderness. 2. The relatively long and slow-paced process can adapt to points such as you are not used to or don't like. 3. I feel like the writing sometimes feels OOC but sometimes it's brilliant and thorough. 4. From the looks of it, I feel like there aren't many fanfics that don't have a sense of reality and are too white. The descriptions are okay. 5. I have written quite a lot and can read it for a few days without losing it quickly. To sum up If you can tolerate a certain degree of OOC or outrageous behavior in the characters, and you would like to read a Jukai fanfic, but you have time but don't have the resources to read it, you can still read it.

My dad was convinced, and after watching it for a long time, I realized there were no comments [smile]

It looks good, but who is the other male protagonist?

I praise the author for being so beautiful. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. Just keep the author true to his heart👌🏻There are always people who will like it. At the same time, I also hope that he will not be affected by those with malicious intentions~~It's not that the readers are inactive, it should be that there are more divers? Ahaha, speaking of Cangzhujiang's Xipi (it does exist, right¿), how long will it take to confirm it? I'm a little curious~~ I'm also looking forward to the follow-up plot, and I can't wait to get into the big draft box. Off-topic (please forgive me for any offence): Are they bisexual? I saw a lot of replies in the comment area~~ Mainly because of the two men who have spells. It's not easy to meet such a cutie like Cangzhu Also, the white hair and blue eyes are really high! ! Let's not say that it's a conspicuous and a bit embarrassed to show his hand!

648. The author's writing is very good, and he has a strong desire to survive. I really like the original plot of "Insecure" and the original team's choice of fan fiction. Fanfiction is about watching something different. The text version of the original plot is boring, so it's better to just read the manga. Therefore, I really like the author's original plot. As for the characters' OOC aspects, I don't think that, after all, in the text, their growth is like this. As long as it is not too outrageous, it is acceptable (for example, the chicken breaks the cat and becomes the ancient tyrant Sougo. This is the author's fault for writing it like this) Come on! It was a pleasure to read the article, but after turning into a mouse, I felt that the style of the painting was a bit distorted, and the reading became a bit irritating. Then there is the ending that feels a bit hasty... Also, I am in the middle of it. The three people written are so obvious, and the ending is really weird, so I don't like this ending very much.

I really like it. It's just two pieces. Hahahaha

It's very interesting. I think it's pretty good. The reason why I didn't give it full stars is because I wanted to add the star after it was finished. Mainly because I was afraid that it would be interrupted and the ending would be bad, so I waited until it was finished and then added the fifth star.

Will I still see updates in my lifetime? The sky is blue waiting for misty rain, and I am waiting for your update Bright and moving, everyone is in love with everyone, the country is falling, the city is falling, the fish is falling, the moon is shy, the flowers are shy, the beauty in the world comes out of the world, refined and broken, the white jade is flawless, beautiful, unparalleled, beautiful, beautiful and lovely, everyone is as pale as a chrysanthemum, as delicate as a flower, so true. Pure, perfect, beautiful, like a fairy, gentle and elegant, dignified and beautiful, a natural lady, a natural beauty, a stunning beauty, a beautiful country, a fragrant grace, graceful and graceful, the best in the world, the most beautiful in the world, please add a few more articles! Madam, at a young age, you have the talent to navigate the world and the wisdom to stabilize the country. The ancients said that a crouching dragon and a phoenix can bring peace to the world. Now, God bless us in Greater China. In the past 5,000 years of vicissitudes, there has been a thunder on the ground, flying sand and rocks, and a great dance in the sky. In the haze, only a single piece of gold can be seen standing tall in the sky. God Jia Tian stands between heaven and earth. This hero holds two axes and his eyes are like lightning. When one ax goes down, chaos begins to bloom. When he goes down with two axes, Nuwa creates humans. When he goes down with three axes, Xiaosheng falls. It is a blessing to have such a great hero. It is a blessing to the people. How can it not make people cry with joy... So when will you update? Grandma! The ones you are following haven't been updated yet! After reading your work, I couldn't help but feel refreshed. I felt that the seven meridians and eight meridians were smooth, and the seven orifices were opened six and a half times. So when will you update? The author hurry up and fill in the pit, Xiao Transparent has had a hard time waiting. Spring is here, everything is new, the grass is sprouting new shoots, but you haven't updated yet!

Beautiful! Cangzhu is so cute awa! Wu*Cang*Xia 1 0 1

I stayed up late to watch it all at once. Friendly reminder. Wen Ye's OOC is serious and it may be necessary for the plot. Anyway, don't watch Mori Tui and don't watch Jae Tui either. I'm afraid you won't be able to stand it. Each of the characters in Jushuai is very richly written, and they are indeed very imaginative. In short, they came here for the sandwich in the beginning. Tomato always opens the door to the world for me in novels, but where can I find someone who has read Bunno, Conan and Jushuai to complain about the plot? Oh, yes, considering Conan, including the background board, some settings are not used. For example, Fumino has no books, and Toru Amuro and other righteous police officers did not appear at all.