Reborn: Heaven Ranks Second, I Rank First

I have read Chapter 129 so far. Actually, I don't really like reading this kind of fantasy novels because the spells and stuff are too hard to remember, but I can read this one. The author's writing is good, his words are fluent, and he has a sense of pictures. Every character is created with flesh and blood. They are not the protagonist's tools, but real companions. The heroine suffered so many hardships in her previous life, and I thought there would be a drama about the heroine letting go of the past. But after I saw the heroine drank Li Ruoshui's wine and got poisoned, then performed a dissection to remove worms from her abdomen, I knew that Fu Xue would definitely die. The author has set up this plot very well, without being abrupt, and clearly unfolds the four words "blood feud" in front of us. It truly explains what the heroine suffered in her previous life. Then there is the character of the heroine, who is ruthless but protective of her shortcomings. You can risk everything for the people around you. Let's talk about Yu Lanzi. When she appeared, I almost thought that the author was going to have a scene where two women compete for one man, or the female partner is jealous and frequently tries to trip up the female protagonist. To be honest, this kind of plot is too tiring to watch, but the author avoids this. She took off her fans, and she clearly sided with the heroine. Furthermore, Fu Xue is, well... A mentally retarded person, so there's nothing much to say, so let's pass it. Then there is Cong Xing and Song Sheng. When I first read the beginning, I frowned subconsciously. Because many authors make a mistake unconsciously - pulling. Even if this character is a friend, he will be suppressed to highlight the heroine. But this kind of plot can only fool children. If you read it too much, you will feel that if you put it in another novel, it is just a certain junior sister who is partial to me, and what will I do when I come back. The only difference is that it's not written down. But this book is different. In many subsequent chapters, it can be seen from the details that Song Sheng really cannot tell the difference between herbs, which makes Cong Xing's attitude much more reasonable. But sometimes it is appropriate to describe Cong Xing's concern for Song Sheng, and clearly show that the relationship between the two is actually very good. It can make people feel that their hearts are connected. Furthermore, it is the author's description when he encounters a life crisis. Many authors will write about the protagonist's injuries and chance encounters. Although this book also writes about it, it is written half and half because the other part belongs to the supporting characters - the protagonists from their perspective. They have love, hate, anger, ignorance, regret, and many more, profoundly showing what life is at stake. After all, every time we encounter a crisis, the protagonist will turn it around. We all subconsciously think so, right? Therefore, the author uses the psychology of the supporting characters to show the danger of the situation, which is a clever move. Of course, this book also has shortcomings. For example, Li Ruoshui ended up being stabbed to death by the heroine. When I only watched the first part, I thought this was a good ending, but when I saw the heroine disembowelled herself with her own hands in order to survive in the previous life, I couldn't help but get angry. Why did the supporting character die so easily? What qualifications does she have! Another point is the emotional aspect of the male protagonist. This is why I will talk about the male protagonist last. Because his emotional transitions are not vivid and delicate enough, it still feels a bit abrupt. Why do you fall in love with the heroine so much? He is not a womanizer! How come you fell in love so quickly? Is it just because the heroine is excellent and unyielding? If there are other supporting characters who like the heroine's description because of this, then I won't find it so out of the ordinary. I will only take it for granted, after all, everyone in the world loves the heroine, and will only lament how excellent she is. But alas, no. There is no scene where the supporting character likes the heroine. Although on the one hand, it eliminates the rough plot of two affectionate men falling in love and having to compete with two men for one woman, on the other hand, it also exposes the shortcomings of emotional transitions that are not vivid. I hope the author can improve his writing skills in this area and take it to the next level! Finally, I want to say that this book is worth reading and it is very interesting. Don't give up on this book just because I talked about the shortcomings of this book at length. The shortcomings are not covered up. I put the shortcomings at the end just so that readers will not run away the first time they see my review. That is not my intention. What I really want to say is that this book is very good, it just has a few minor flaws, but it is still worth reading. Finally, I wish you all a happy reading, that the author's writing skills will be improved to a higher level, and that he will make a lot of money.

Generally speaking, books written by new writers are difficult to read carefully, but this one gave me a sense of proficiency as if I had written three or four books. In this book-traveling system that overflows with fairy tales, is there any book that is purely about rebirth? There is no golden finger given by the system, and some are not from God's perspective, but are entirely based on my own memory. In terms of stage processing, the speed of progress in cultivation is a bit fast. This is the first time I have encountered it. Referring to other fairy tales, it is normal for the protagonist Jindan Yuanying to be thirty or forty years old. This one is fast-paced. In terms of character creation, the protagonist's character creation is very realistic, such as killing the Liang family group and stabbing Fuxue with a sword and saying that he will kill him personally in the future. This is not the great love in other novels, this is a murderer who killed himself in his previous life. He is not a virgin but not vicious either. The characters are very lively, as if they have their own thoughts and know what they should do. Occasionally losing their minds is just the imperfection of being a "human" The plot connects quickly, but it doesn't make people feel abrupt. The intertwining of family and friendship gives a warm feeling, especially when the protagonist says in front of his parents' graves that he has good friends and people who love him. It is very warm and good, and the appropriate lyricism is not just lyrical. (Of course, I have only read chapter 60 or 70, and I was really moved. I also found that the traffic of this book is not particularly good. I hope the author can keep writing.) (The book next door, "The Chronicles of a Passer-by Who Cultivation to Immortality," has been updated for more than a hundred chapters and has only a few thousand readers. I also wrote a book review. That book is slowly getting better now, but there are so many typos. If you like a slow pace, it's a pity to read my book review first before reading that book.)

Uh ah ah ah, I don't want Xie to be with the heroine. I fell in love with the friend beast from my previous life. It's my fate to fall in love with the male counterpart [crying]

The author will update soon!!!!!!!! Senior Brother Xie misses Junior Nephew Liang, no, I mean Senior Brother Xie misses Junior Sister Liang, oh, in fact, Tu Yi misses the alchemy book [shy][shy][ Shy] To be honest, I wanted to watch it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying] The author writes quickly ✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻

The group portraits are well written, and as a new book that is still being serialized, it is quite a surprise. I think the male protagonist seems to be very strong, but he looks a little weak in combat power. The heroine is promoted too quickly. Although she can use rebirth to justify her promotion, her promotion is like eating jelly beans [laughing and crying] The pace is so fast

Come on! It's really good to read, but there were a few chapters that made me burst into tears. Big cheers for the author! I always feel that the heroine's mother is not dead, right? If she dies, the heroine will suffer too much [crying]

It is a particularly good book. The heroine has her own ideas. She is kind but not a holy mother. I personally prefer Xiao Xie to be the male protagonist. I hope the heroine can live a better life. Thank you for your hard work on the author's code. I give you a five-star review.

@Rabbit Keep up the good work, the writing is good, this is the first time I comment on a book, keep up the good work😘

It's so pretty, so pretty! ! ! ! I love it so much! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Good, good. I immediately liked the character of the heroine. She must avenge herself, so it was really fun to show it to me, hahaha. Great rewards.