Tokyo: I Play Dating Sim Games in Real Life

Hello, I am your reader My hometown is in a rural area and I have a donkey. This donkey is very talented and very good at grinding. He is very creative and the noodles he grinds are loved by everyone in the village. There are even countless wealthy people from big cities who come here to buy grinders from it. Face. This donkey has extraordinary intelligence and works hard every day. He has been working hard and grinding countless high-quality flours. The best flour mill among them even won the world-class "Best Flour" award. All of us love this donkey, he is our divine donkey. But now he is slacking off and no longer grinding dough. We try to coax it and give it delicious food, hoping that it will continue to grind flour. But he said nothing and was unwilling to continue working. It said, "I'm tired and want to take a rest." As a result, it was dragged to the entrance of the village by the village chief and the villagers who were angry because they could not eat high-quality flour. They killed it and made it into donkey meat for burning. You said it was true. Even the donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this. Why did you say it... Alas, why do you think I am talking to you about this? By the way, when are you going to update?

Mr. 666, Hurry up and update, otherwise you don't want others to know your little secret, right? ? ?

Although the book has been revised to remove all relevant content, it is surprisingly interesting, maybe even more interesting - allowing the reader to focus more on the plot of the novel. The design of the characters that can be conquered is also good. The reason why each female character can become a female character is because they have a certain "event". After solving this incident, you can gradually conquer this female character. The protagonist is no longer sentimental, but focuses on two or three heroines, which enhances the protagonist's personality charm and avoids the repetition of "xxx" in the later period to a certain extent. At the same time, the interaction with certain heroines is enhanced to create a back-and-forth description of daily life + events, which can achieve the effect of combining restraint and relief. The article seems to dislike the flatness of mountains, but if there are too many ups and downs, it will be boring. In fact, this book is very suitable to be written as a unit drama, with dozens of chapters centered on a certain female character or a few events, and the element of "healing" can also be added. This is largely the case now. Take Arisu Cherry as an example. Women who are deeply involved in sexual harassment suffer all kinds of persecution. The protagonist accidentally breaks in. In the end, in order to protect his girlfriend as a "family man", he solves her husband and liberates her by the way. If you could expand the story of Arisu Cherry, for example, describe her life and how she was tortured by that scumbag, and how when she was getting along with the protagonist, she not only wanted to frame the protagonist, but she also hesitated, and even had a certain affection for the protagonist, but she was forced to be tortured and did not dare to show it... Of course, in the end It will definitely not be accepted in the end, but you can describe her moving towards a new life, such as "because I have been caught in the rain, so I want to hold an umbrella for more people." She found an opportunity to get rid of the scumbag who ruined her life, cleared all traces of the past, and began to provide support for more women who are suffering. Here I would like to make some suggestions to the author: The first is to modify the title, introduction, cover, and beginning, and make the content of the article more like a healing article, such as "a Taekwondo girl who is bullied, a wife who is trapped in violence..." And so on, and indicate from the beginning that the women defined by the system as target targets are "problem women", and maybe some descriptions of the difficulty of the strategy can be given. For example, those with a quick solution such as Arisu Sakura will be given a C level, while those with a deeper background will be given an A level, S level, etc... It is recommended that the author read the novels of Hotaru Shouma to enrich himself. The second system holder appears in the latest chapter. It is probably because the protagonist's strength and status were raised too high before, so that it is no longer possible to find a new villain to create plot conflicts and promote the development of the story. There is no foreshadowing before the key point, it is simply baffling. This book is probably going to suck.

Author, please hold back, I'm afraid I won't be able to read the book [face covering]

The previous plot is very delicate. I thought the author would only be able to tell this kind of story. Unexpectedly, later on, when the protagonist faced the bullying incident, he was very happy and happy. It was reasonable, good, good, very good.

The content is good. I got the first girl in about 26 chapters, and then the plot starts to have big ups and downs after 30 to 40 chapters. It's a bit exciting. I don't mind listening to the book, and it's more interesting to read. The characters in the foreshadowing are good, so remember to fill them in. The car is in good condition, but I won't drive it often. , After all, it is released from the small dark room. I hope that while maintaining the quality, the content of a chapter can be stabilized at 3,000 words. Too few is the current shortcoming, and there is also the fact that it is locked in the small dark room, and everything is a bit tight [laughing] Come on, author [blowing kiss] [top post] [please update] The system of this book mainly focuses on the general direction. I think it is currently aimed at conquering various young ladies. Although the routines used are cliché, the writing scene is different (Tokyo). The key is to arouse the emotions of the readers (I was a little angry when I read it there). If you want to read the kind of urban harem novel that accepts all kinds of young ladies, I recommend this [Send Heart] @yu I am thinking about reading a book like this when I have time. Although the book failed before, there are many movies and TV shows to refer to. It is also a good subject. Just remember to hold back to live longer [face covering]

It's nice to see, but can I draw a lottery immediately after maxing it out? Is it possible to give me some peace of mind without holding it in my hand first? By the way, I feel like I can add another upgrade card that I can get after my favorability reaches 100 to upgrade (Mastery) to (Master). Although the male protagonist's school scene was really fun, being forced to run away was really embarrassing. Please strengthen it quickly.

Okay, okay, I hope to continue to stick to it, I feel it is very good-looking, not long-winded, and the protagonist is also very decisive, but I still hope that there will be a single female protagonist later, and the way to increase my favorability is to save others.

If you don't have enough culture, good things may seem like a slap in the face. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! ! !

The protagonist has strong military strength, acts decisively, is not clumsy, and is very good-looking. Keep up the good work.