Book One by Salted Duck Egg Stewed with Vermicelli

The first story is a little confusing. Personally, I don't think it matters. I skipped all the plots I didn't like, but reading the comments it seems that some people care about it, so I'll mention it anyway. Mainly focus on the second half of the first story When the protagonist fought back against the villain, the plot was not handled very well, which caused some people to think that the protagonist was stupid. But the protagonist doesn't know that others are going to harm him and still rushes forward. He has his own plans. When the protagonist's parents knew that they were in love, their words were sharper and more hurtful. Because the protagonist just saved Shou, and then Shou's parents spoke like this, I personally think it is quite hurtful. Because life is important first, and then everything else. No matter what, he saved your son, and more than once. Personally, I think it's a bit inappropriate to say that about the protagonist. There is a twist in the last two pictures, that is, the parents of the recipient immediately want to leave, but the handling here is still not very good, and some people may not feel comfortable watching it. If I have to say it again, the character of the main character in the original novel is a bit old-fashioned and brainless, but that's what ancient novels are like, with even more outrageous characters. The first story is basically like this, a decent love drama. This is the first book where the author has changed from male to female. Everyone should be more tolerant and encourage me. I think it's good to write a female-channeled article for the first time. I often see some outrageous love plots in men's videos, and I personally think it's pretty good written like this.

Give five stars for encouragement and hope to keep up the good work! I really like the character design, and the romance is sweet, but I feel that the overall situation still needs to be strengthened, and I can't pinpoint what's wrong. I still hope you will continue to work hard, keep learning and make progress! I kind of understand, it's just that being slapped in the face isn't fun enough. Looking at the first world, I can see that the main plot of saving the second male lead has a part about him turning around and being slapped in the face. However, the protagonist's slaps in the face are only limited, and there are very few scenes where the pros and cons actually confront each other. At least the first three worlds feel a little overheated. The emotional scenes are sweet and warm, but the slap-in-the-face plot line is a bit off the mark, so it feels like the overall movie is neither good nor bad.

It's very interesting. The author should keep it updated. It would be better if more updates are added [shy]

It's really good. I've gained a lot of knowledge even before I've finished watching One World. [I've learned] why the rating is so low. I don't understand [what]

It's quite good-looking, not abusive. The protagonist's external personality changes a little in each world. The emotional development is quite reasonable and not abrupt. Then it's a sweet story, hehe [laughing evilly]

Vocal accidentally saw a topic I was interested in and clicked in. I saw that the rating was very low and I wanted to quit, but I still read it. The writing is very good and humorous, not at all elementary school students. The writing is very good, ah ah ah ah, give it to me, give it to me, contribute to the rating

The author's writing is very good, first-class, highly recommended! ! I am really picky about reading books. After many days, it is not easy to find one that suits my heart. The writing is ok, the plot is ok, the characters are ok, um... I like it! Support, write more and read more!

Very pretty! The author is a Northeastern 180+, and the plot is quite straightforward! It is very different from the common fast-traveling articles. Some of the theories in it are related to reality. I have really studied them carefully, and the author really understands the reader's mind! It's very interesting (I'll comment later after I've finished reading it all [cool])

Read them all! All in all, it was wonderful! A very grand cycle, this setting irritates me every time. Many of the previous small worlds do have some problems. In the first world, the follow-up character of the original heroine is a bit too much. In the second world, Qiu Jue's emotional transformation is not very well written. Those who mind it will mind it, but those who don't mind will have no problem with the story! The writing is very good. The third world was skipped for some reasons, so I can't give you any suggestions. The fourth world, Interstellar ABO, I like this kind of setting every time. It's very well written! No big problem! When I read the fifth world, it was revised by the author. I didn't skip it, and it was well written! Some people say it's lengthy, but I think it's fine and very complete. The sixth one is the apocalyptic article, sweet, sweet, sweet! The world view of the last world is also very large, almost completely open. This is equivalent to the beginning, the source of everything, it is very beautiful! ! All in all, all in all, you will definitely enjoy watching it! ! ! The author's writing style is also good. [Top post][Send heartfelt message]

The author has written very well for the first time in this genre! ! I feel that the author's idea of ​​small worlds is very good. I feel that it would be good to turn each small world into a short story. I feel that the connection between the several worlds in Quick Time is a bit jerky, but it is very good! Both the xp and the character of the protagonist are very good [blowing kiss] Finally, I think the author can try to write a side story to add more detailed foreshadowing!