Guardians of the Heart: Lin Feng Bu Nagi

It looks good, the writing is smooth, and the characters are not very OOC. The style of the whole novel is indeed a bit fragmented, but it is fragmented in a good, logical and hidden way, so it is not a big problem. [Eat melon] In the early stage, it was obvious that the storyline was a guardian sweetheart style template. In the later stage, you can clearly feel that the author's writing is becoming more and more smooth, and he has more and more personal opinions. The arrangement of the emotional line was also slightly stiff in the early stage, relying entirely on the heroine to rely on unwritten childhood memories to hold the arrow. Whether it was the hero's vague memory or the wariness of the heroine, as well as the proportion of the plot, atmosphere and character creation in the early stage, if it weren't for the copywriting clearly stating who the CP was, I would have really doubted whether the heroine was going to have a lily with Yameng in the middle of reading [face covering] I feel that the relationship line in the later period is relatively smooth. No matter what others think, I really got involved when the male protagonist declined the confession. He really took this relationship seriously. The female protagonist silently fell in love with the male protagonist. The male protagonist completely pulled the female protagonist into the circle of tolerance, as well as the specialness and affection expressed by the "pen pal". Anyway, I felt that it was quite easy to relate to, and it was in line with the standard of sweetness for their age group (what) It's just that the update speed is a bit slow. I finished it in one go. I'll save it now and look forward to my wife's next update. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's so good to watch and I really like it. I have to take a lot of medicine to get rid of it. I want to see the ending [crying]. The characters are particularly full-bodied. The author has his own ideas. He does not follow the original drama episode by episode but writes from the main perspective of the original characters. He has his own story background. I like it very much [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

After reading this, I feel that I am a good candidate for cultivating the ruthless path.

This book is not like most other fanfics, which completely follows the perspective of the protagonist, or highlights its own male and female protagonists by stealing the spotlight from the original protagonist group. We, Linlin, have our own lives, complete thoughts, and our own highlights. We are not rigid puppets who follow the plot. Until now, in the latest chapter of the Dada update, Linlin has started from the perspective of a bystander - discovering the original plot - trying to change - staying away from Japan - trying to fill the regrets outside the plot. She really writes what she wants to tell us, and the basic logic is self-consistent, so it can be read with a little brain. (PS: At the beginning, I did come here for "Guardian Sweetheart" and "CP is Nadeshiko". Linlin and Nadeshiko are also childhood sweethearts, and I like them very much. However, Linlin's two identities: arrogant and elegant young lady × gentle and considerate guardian, this is also very good, ah, I am dead.)

So we really can't let Linlin be beautiful alone, and then meet someone better, better, and more suitable for Linlin? [Almost crying] (Okay, I know it's impossible) I really feel that he is not worthy. It is always Linlin who takes the initiative, who wrongs herself, and never considers her own feelings, so can happiness also come to Linlin's hands? Closer to home, this guardian fanfic is much better than the fanfics I have found in Tomato novels so far. It is not the same old story about becoming a big or small king, intervening in the main plot, etc. More of the plot is on us, Linlin, and then interspersed with some plot lines. It is more for me to read. When it comes to Linlin's growth process, working hard for her dreams, giving 200% to her friends and having a secret love that she doesn't know when she will get a response, the author hasn't finished it yet, leaving a star for the author to finish it, so can she not let Linlin be so wronged? [I'm about to cry], I want to hug Linlin

Write quickly! Write eight hundred chapters a day! Don't make me, please, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Fujisaki, really, can hurt the heroine's heart so much. Everything is a dream, and everything is your friends. Looking at it from a God's perspective, I really feel that Rin might as well go solo and be the heroine by herself. It doesn't matter if this book doesn't have a male protagonist.

The second book that got me into trouble after the first one! (What a heinous crime!) (Bushi) I have always preferred novels, because in my opinion, the characters in novels are more "flesh and blood" and can arouse my empathy more. This is the case with this novel. My wife made reasonable and incomplete settings for the invisible parts of the anime Leia Dream, and used this to make the characters "alive", no longer weak and weak. In fact, I generally don't like the protagonists of comic books, because it seems that the world has already been determined and everything is taken for granted, but you are different, Rin, please love yourself a little more, you are worth it.

It's good-looking, but I don't think it needs a male protagonist. I feel like the female protagonist can just grow up on her own. After reading the last chapter, I realized that no one seemed to care about the heroine.

Mom, as long as you are willing to continue writing, I can change from a dark and scary mad woman to a sunny and lively little girl. Do you understand, the kind of lively little girl who laughs and sounds like a silver bell🤲🏻

Alas, even though he knew that Agari didn't like the heroine in the early stage and didn't even know she was a girl, he still couldn't help but feel aggrieved for him when he showed that he was special to Yameng in front of the heroine. In addition, he already knew that the heroine liked him, and he was afraid of showing his specialness to other girls in front of people who like him. It was a bit uncomfortable mentally. Even if they are together in the future, there will be estrangement [crying][crying][crying][crying]