
Wuxia Crossover: Master of the Heavenly Secrets Pavilion, from the Start Jingni Wants to Kill Me
综武:天机阁主,开局惊鲵要杀我
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Can't you just add some punctuation?
Can't you just write this straight out? Brother, you're selling intelligence, and you're talking about governing a country? Besides, who is Qin Zheng? Who is Prince Shang? If Ying Zheng didn't have capable people around him, how could he have unified China? Even the king of a mere Han didn't come to you. Ying Zheng coming to you means he's inferior to a mere Han king in every way, and he didn't even dare kill a nobody like Ji Wuye? One star is too much for that!
It's a mess, they just randomly changed the original character settings!
A "cool" story doesn't focus on the thrill! It's all about the **bangbanghammer** (a popular internet slang term for a powerful, satisfying story).
It lacks any class and comes across as overly eager to curry favor. Before the other person even asks, the protagonist is already eagerly offering advice, showing absolutely no air of omniscience or omnipotence. It's rather unbecoming.
You've got the concept of "realm" wrong.
It's a mess.