The Spirit Card General Store

This is really well written; I hope the author won't abandon the story.

Keep up the good work, author! The protagonist's inner thoughts are well-written. Keep it up, I believe in you! (And please be mindful of censorship.)

Four stars for encouragement, but I wouldn't highly recommend it. There are some minor issues with the system; it overly suppresses the protagonist. A general store-themed system should be relatively fair—not necessarily absolutely fair, but at least fairly so that players are more willing to spend money later on. You can't change the system variables just because someone draws a good item. That's all for now; I'll skip the rest for now.

So far, it's not bad, pretty good 😊. It's a semi-satisfying, readable novel 😆😆😆😆😆😏😏😏😏😏

It's so good! Five stars! Five stars! Objectively speaking, it's pretty good, five stars. I hope it doesn't fall apart later on. By the way, I read chapter 23 in advance, haha, the author is so funny, just like me 😏😏

It doesn't feel like a dangerous world at all. It's too slow.

The content is still good, but I'm deducting one star because I personally don't like the role of the system spirit.

It's such a good subject matter, why did they have to include so many female characters?

The author's work is great, although it hasn't been rated yet. But it will be eventually, keep it up!

It's alright, but the pacing is too slow and the author doesn't really know how to write satisfying moments.