Chronicles of the God of War: Unrivaled Across the Three Realms

It's very beautiful, and don't give it to a girl. No matter if the heroine is Xinyue Kui, Xinyue Fox, or both, if it's both, then don't give it to a girl. Come on! ! !

Looks good, not brainless

Very good, very good, very good

Okay, not bad, good luck to the author. [Blowing kiss]

It looks good. I thought the protagonist's supernatural power would become a point of complaint, but when I saw Good Guys, it was quite refreshing. Is Blue Moon that strong? Isn't this thing inferior to Zhen Zen and Tian Wu?

What is the protagonist's life experience?

Author, you are making me feel very itchy. Can I have four or five cigarettes a day? During this May Day holiday, you don't have to work since you have a lot of time. I will just give you 100 yuan as a gift to spend your money. As long as you dare to buy four or five sticks a day. During this May Day holiday, I will just give you a gift without saying a word.

I don't think the writing is too ugly, and it's okay. At present, the protagonist has more and more tricks, but the purpose of the hook is to make the protagonist stronger so that the writing can be more enjoyable. But at present, there are still relatively few cool points. Since the timeline of the story is far away from the main line of the original work, it is a bit difficult to arrange the storyline. And since there are so few chapters, it seems difficult to maintain coherence. And I didn't see any cool points or climaxes. All I can say is that if you update it more, maybe more people will read it.

Not bad, not a brainless article

The writing is okay, keep up the good work.