From the Start: The Proper System Refuses Minors

The writing is good + the organization is clear + the logic is smooth + the origin and ability of the golden finger are also arranged so that it is edible. There are so many advantages, and it doesn't matter if it has some minor flaws. Of course, it would be better if the author updated it more.

Although the name of this book is not very eye-catching, the content is very interesting. The only drawback is that the number of words is a bit short, more than 100,000 words. I originally wanted to read it, but I ran out of books to read, so I read this one and found it to be quite good. Still working hard to catch up on updates, please hurry up, author ⊙∀⊙!

After seeing the latest chapter, I think it's pretty good. Su Shuang is neither thunderous nor special. The protagonist is on the side of justice. He is a little smart but not very smart, and his personality is also very likable. It's to my liking! ! ! ! Seeing that so far, there are still many things that have blossomed along the way, and there are many things that need to be described, such as how the road construction is going, when will the second part of "Bao Yan" be released, and what is going on with the bad guy in the Five Elements. For things like Lu Guogong, are there some bad guys here who are behind the tragedy? What about selling salt in other countries? When will the mall be able to buy things above white quality? When will you go through the tribulation for the second time, and when will you take the merit elixir for the second time? It feels like it could be a long story. Come on! Save more manuscripts!

So far, it's still well written. I hope the author won't get into any bad habits in the future and won't collapse. After all, one hundred thousand words is really just the beginning of a farming article, and the future is very uncertain.

I have been reading this book on Tomato for two years. This book is really a rare masterpiece. The pace is very comfortable and the plot is ingenious. I just wanted to search for other books and found that this is the only one. If it is the author's first book, he is really quite talented. If he persists in writing, he will definitely become a great master.

The protagonist's spontaneity is deeply influenced by his past life, and it feels very immersive to watch. The world has changed, but the protagonist has not changed, so the contradictions arise. The author has written it very well, and the protagonist has been blended in just right. The supporting characters do not feel abrupt, and the audience is smooth to watch.

The book is quite nice, but it is designed to prevent theft. No, you have already published the book on Tomato, do you still need to protect it from theft?

Looks good (＾ω ^ ) but a little lacking Can he be said to have a slow pace? It can also be said to be very slow. But he was clear and logical, and his introduction to the origin of the golden finger was pretty good. Overall, is it a good book about farming and cultivating immortals?

Good looking, but not enough

It's super interesting. After reading the latest chapter, I'm very satisfied with every place. The description of the protagonist's hometown is very detailed and immersive. Burning incense and complaining about grandpa are also very funny. As for being tricked by the system, it's not a trick! It's Jin Taiji. If the system is turned up as soon as it comes out, it will not have the refreshing feeling of developing an upgrade flow. The author's settings are very good and quite logical. It is different from ordinary tomato products, it is particularly logical and beautiful.