As a Live-In Son-in-Law, I Just Want to Run Away

See the end in one breath! It's a really novel setting, with its own ideas, and the progression of the main plot is very comfortable. Unlike system writing, it's all bad now! I'm sick of looking at it! The protagonist's logical thinking is rigorous and he is capable, and the few climaxes look very comfortable. Some parts of what I wrote later do feel a bit off, hehe.

It's a pretty good story about a son-in-law, and it creates a very innovative psychological entry point. [Like] Although there are still some irregularities in the psychological activities of the male protagonist and the female protagonist and the details of the story, the writing is smooth and smooth and makes people read it in one sitting.

5 Points is only the upper limit of Tomato and does not represent the author's level. Very good idea. I'll give it 5 points and go reward it.

A journey of self-transcendence in another world... You can't live without becoming a demon... The idea may be crazy but it's reasonable... Five stars. I thought few people would read the 800+ reminder... Don't you like to talk? ? [Laughing awkwardly]

Some people may think that the protagonist's suspicion is naive, but I think this setting is quite novel and interesting, and I have unlimited support.

"This uncle is obviously very strong but too cautious"

I have to say that the author's subject matter ideas are very innovative, but unfortunately he still doesn't break out of this circle. The plot is similar to other ancient novels. It is probably about chasing the husband in the crematorium and turning into a yandere and continuing to chase her. Then the male protagonist has a feeling of playing a game and passing the plot. But overall, based on this theme, it is still very good.

Damn, I found gold in the shit! Novel theme! ! The writing is also good! Five stars from 9000 hours of readers! No! !

I don't understand why so many people are talking about "The Truman Show". This is obviously just a reason for the author to create the protagonist. The protagonist fits the image of a real time traveler. In the feudal dynasty, people cannibalize people. Let alone my wife, my parents can't believe it. Is there anyone who can't accept that the heroine had her first love? [Laughing]

Very detailed. 'Many people say that after reading so many chapters, the male protagonist should also doubt and think about whether this is the real real world.' I think the male protagonist thinks that he is in the Truman world and the mastermind behind the scenes will really kill people, so he does not dare to ask everyone here, because it means that he will die if he is exposed. So I will cooperate with the acting (the male protagonist concludes that it is The Truman World through the scar on his eyebrow, the mole on his chest, and his advocating scientific atheism and believes that it is extremely reasonable), so it is very detailed, and the other characters are also very vivid! Secondly, the male protagonist will not talk to anyone in the world about Truman, because he dare not mention it above unless he is determined to die. But so what if he said it, can they, the natives, know? When the male protagonist sees their attitude, he will think that I rely on you to continue acting. For example, it is like a modern person telling an ancient person that the earth is round, such a simple thing. If you directly cover this kind of high-level thinking for him, even if you tell him, she won't understand it. She will only think that the hero has changed his personality after waking up or is emotionally wrong, talking nonsense, etc., So he will be stuck in this kind of thinking and there is no way to get rid of it. Thinking in reverse, I ask you readers who are reading my comments, I say that you live in a world that is being calculated, and you also know that your life may be controlled by a program, but do you have any way to change it? There is no other way but to do what you can do now. There is only one way for the male protagonist to ask questions when he wants to die, and firmly conclude that they really really don't know, then the male protagonist will stop. It should be the ending, so we can't talk about the ending yet, because you can't write the ending right from the beginning of a novel.