System: My Water-Type Ability Awakened into Mirror Flow? What the Heck?

Ah, Kyoryu is so cute, she smells so good, I really want to lock her in the basement, tie her hands and feet with chains, so that she can't move or escape, make her hate me, hahahahaha, I really like her, she must also like me, I want her to only look at me, let her become my exclusive toy, hahahahaha Ah, Kyoryu is so beautiful. I really want to strip her naked, tie her up, and then electrify her body. Just thinking about how she screams makes me feel so excited. I put a fishing line through her mouth and then out from the back. Let her lie down and lead her around. I feel so excited when I see her being humiliated by me, hahahahaha. I will tie her to the cross, torture her with various instruments of torture, strangle her with a rope until she rolls her eyes, and drip candle oil on her body. Hahahahahaha. I really want to see her in pain. I will torture her until life is worse than death. Hahahahahaha.

The book is very beautiful, but the shortcoming is also very obvious, that is, the author cannot update hundreds of thousands of times a day.

How to say it? Let me summarize a few points: 1: The punctuation issue that everyone complains about, but you have started to adjust gradually, so it is not a big problem 2: The protagonist's character can add a little bit of itself. If it is all Kage flow, it will be meaningless. It does not mean that the character must be different from Kage flow, but that the Kage character is the main one and the protagonist's character is supplemented. 3: As for the Lily novel, I have read too many stories where one attacks and one receives, and I feel like it would be better if I could exchange attacks and receive. 4: The overall pace of this book is relatively fast, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read from the beginning. The pace can be slowed down a bit, but not too slow. Considering the author's writing style, some other daily routines can be added to the original plot. Overall, this book seems to be okay. It is better than other books. The above are the points I summarized after reading this book. I don't know if it will be helpful to the author's future articles. Anyway, I will add this book to my bookshelf. I feel like the cover could be changed. It could be changed to a profile view, which could show the rustle of the runoff. As for the title, I don't have any ideas at the moment, so I can't make any comments.

Very nice! The writing is okay, but the characters speak without quotation marks.

Kyoryu's character is almost cold on the outside and hot on the inside. He should [Think] You can write it according to this character The character will not be written down [you taste it carefully]

To be honest, your writing is really good. Although some of the settings are a bit weird at the end, it can't stop its advantages. He was like Jingliu's daughter and son writing about her past experiences. I was very happy to see the rest. Jingliu had a good home, Jingyuan also found the place he hoped for, and Fu Xuan became a general as he wished. Watching the ending of Jingliu is like watching an old friend finally find a home, a lover, a family, and an open life of his own. @ You wrote very well.

Author, can you write your next book? Bai Heng

The content is great, except for a bit weird at the beginning, it is very interesting later on.

The handwriting is very good and very beautiful.

It can be seen that the handwriting is getting better gradually and it is not so strenuous to read. After all, it is my first time writing, and there is not much preparation, so it can be regarded as impromptu, so I support it with 5 stars. There's nothing too poisonous about it, but it just doesn't have a worldview, and it's always hard to expand. I can't say anything, I just hope that the author can try his best to write an ending. It would be better if he could take this book seriously [Love]