A World of Machines, and Only I Can See Their Compatibility

The subject matter is good, and the writing style is decent, but it's not really to my taste. There aren't any major flaws, but the author hasn't made much money and is already going out partying. He doesn't have any powerful connections and is already using his abilities recklessly – are you really not afraid of attracting unwanted attention? I've read about 30 pages, so I'll give it four stars. 🍉

Personally, I think this book is better than the other one so far. I'll keep the last star to see how it goes. 😊🤔

To take the ordinary, readily available path is not a permanent one; to take the ordinary, readily available name is not a permanent one. To take a name from the nameless is like the beginning of heaven and earth before their separation; to take a name from the named is the fundamental source of all things.

My face was grave. I lowered my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, got up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 Nongfu Spring water (a rare vintage), and clutched it tightly in my hand. I slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside was somewhat gloomy, just like my mood—heavy, very heavy. Gradually, a light rain began to fall from the gray sky outside. Why?

The main characters' team had absolutely no sense of secrecy; they revealed almost everything about their special weapons' abilities. Furthermore, they lacked any vigilance, revealing everything to outsiders.

I'd say it's alright, I guess. It only gets interesting when it's updated to over 300,000 words.

The genre is quite good. I personally prefer the kind of uncertainty that comes with assembly and evolution, because you never know where the author's imagination is going. It seems the author missed the point! Personally, I think the main selling point of this type of novel lies in the plot, the evolutionary path seen through the protagonist's special ability, and the process of transformation.

I think it's okay to have two female leads, Gu Lan and Lan, but not too early. Let's wait until three-quarters of the way through before adding any romantic subplots. If it's a single female lead, it's best if there's no female protagonist at all, and the female characters in the main cast shouldn't have their fates explicitly stated at the end.

This is the first time I've seen this new genre, but there's just too much filler; it takes several chapters to get to the main point, which discourages many readers.

This is so cool! A novel about unity, a united team, united partners, and mutual trust and support. It's so satisfying. I love novels like this. I love it so much!