The Kingdom's Mary Sue Hero

I have read the first 35 chapters, and they are very good. It is a type that is rarely seen. The story is relatively traditional and does not conform to some of the current mainstream, but it is well written, much better than some villain stories. If you are poor, you can benefit yourself; if you are rich, you can help the world. When you don't have the ability, keep your head down and be a good person. When you have the ability, you can achieve what you want in your heart. Very good perspective. The racial conflicts and estrangements described are relatively profound, but the change in the mentality of some demi-humans in the previous chapters is too abrupt, and it does not seem like they have a blood feud with the human race. For example, the uprising force organized by Hei Lan may be an order issued by Hei Lan in the army after returning, but it is not mentioned in the article, so the change in the mentality of some demi-humans is slightly abrupt. The characterization and description of the protagonist are also relatively profound, but there are still some parts that have not been written. When I read it, I felt that the protagonist was still relatively young and did not have the mature feeling of a young manager in his 30s. Maybe my understanding was different from what the author wanted to express. Overall, the first 35 chapters are well written and worth reading. I hope the author can continue writing. Come on!

Everyone is welcome to comment and support. There is an outline and setting. I promised a certain reader friend that I will write a good story that will not disappoint.

The writing is very good. It's not the kind of brave man who opens a harem like Long Aotian in the light novel. The brave man in this book is like a revolutionary figure who leads the masses to overthrow the old era.

It's beautiful, but the ending is too hasty

Wonderful. There are traces of being pieced together by axe, but the taste is right. This is the real taste of adventure in another world.

Living in the real world of order and chaos, saving the imaginary world of ideals and illusions. Brave men only exist and have illusions

The author writes very well

Perfect. One less star is too short. There are also some minor flaws (I was too rushed in the end).

A good novel, the protagonist has a good outlook on life, and the author has his own views on history