The Kingdom's Mary Sue Hero

I've read the first 35 chapters, and it's quite good; it's a type of story I rarely see. The story is rather traditional and doesn't quite conform to some current mainstream trends, but it's very well written, much better than some villainous novels. It embodies the principles of "When poor, cultivate your own virtue; when successful, benefit all under heaven."

Comments and support are welcome. I have an outline and setting; I promised a reader I would write a good story that won't disappoint.

It's very well written. It's not the kind of light novel where the protagonist is an overpowered hero with a harem. The hero in this book is more like a revolutionary figure leading the masses to overthrow the old era.

It was good, but the ending was too rushed.

Excellent. There are traces of cobbling together, but it gets the flavor right; this is the true taste of an otherworldly adventure.

Living in a real world of order and chaos, they save an ideal and illusory world of imagination. Heroes only exist in fantasy.

The author's writing is quite good.

I'm deducting one star for "perfect" because it's too short and has some minor flaws (the later parts were rushed).

A good novel; the protagonist has strong moral values, and the author has his own insights into history.