I Was Asked to Look After My Friend’s Little Sister, but Now She Won’t Leave Me Alone

I think the author's writing is really good, but I always feel that there are too many buffs on the male protagonist, and some of the deliberate parts seem a bit unnatural. However, I think the beginning is particularly good. I feel that the beginning is very novel and very natural.

It's full of faintness, and some details are handled very well. For example, the male protagonist did not want to take the eldest lady to visit the university by delaying time. Then the eldest lady wasted her own time, but looked for problems from herself. Although it is a normal person's idea, it is also worthy of full faintness.

The beginning is pretty good. The introduction, title, and plot all start with a sweet romance between the protagonist and Shen Hui. As a result, in Chapter 18, one came to me. Bai Yun loves the male protagonist, and the male protagonist also loves Bai Yun. [Smile] I couldn't handle this unprepared poisonous point anyway, so I can only stop here.

So far, the portrayal of the male and female protagonists is okay, and the plot is sweet and not procrastinating. I hope the author will continue to work hard and finish writing this book!

I can only give it four stars because the pace is too slow and ridiculously slow. You can add some daily habits of the male protagonist and the female protagonist to quickly warm up the relationship between the two. Then you can add a little bit of knife. For example, the female protagonist discovers that she likes the male protagonist and confesses her love directly, but the male protagonist refuses. , There are two reasons. First, you are my friend's sister, and you can't embarrass your friend. The second is family background. Then the heroine hid and cried. Later, the hero went to her house to apologize in person, and accepted the heroine's confession. Then the heroine's grandfather helped the hero build his career.

Come on, author. I haven't seen anything poisonous so far.

Hao Kan, I like the author's writing style very much. It gives me a very friendly feeling. At least I like it very much. Although the plot is a bit cliché, it may be due to the filter of the writing style and it is slightly different from other articles (of course, for high emotional intelligence, it is not cliché and is called a classic hh). In short, I like it. I hope the author will continue to work hard. There are very few people who read it, and there is still a lot of room for improvement [Sending Hearts]

It was okay. I felt that the book was a bit short. There were almost no intimate scenes between the male and female protagonists. Their relationship was not really confirmed until the end. But I have to say that the plot is really good. It would be best if the number of words could be more.

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After reading Chapter 20, I don't quite understand who the heroine is? I quit repeatedly to look at the tabs. [Face covering] The label has only one female protagonist, but so far it seems that the female protagonist looks more like Bai? Or two heroines? Anyway, I didn't realize that the heroine was Shen. [Holds face] Look again. If there are a lot of plots about Hua later, would it be more appropriate to have multiple female protagonists? But no matter what happens in the future, for now, it is definitely not a single female protagonist, and it is hard to tell who is the female protagonist. I read the comment section, and many people have the same idea. As far as the first 18 chapters are concerned, Bai is more like the heroine than Shen, but this is obviously a bit off topic? ? Let's take a look and talk.