A Thought: Reborn as Li Tongguang in the Womb, I Change My Name and Fate

It's so beautiful, the writing is mature, the pace is well controlled, and it's not rushed or slow.

Come on, author, the writing is great. Although there are many female protagonists, they don't look like perverts who have never seen women before. Keep it up, author [Like][Like][Like] The writing was quite good at the beginning, but it became more and more sloppy at the end. You are Zhu Tianwen, why is the plot progressing so slowly?

It's really well written, but the timeline is a bit too far forward. You can consider accumulating strength before the main plot to feel faster.

I heard many people say that they stopped watching the TV series after thinking about the ending of Guanshan, where all the protagonists died. However, the writing of this book is not bad. Although I have not watched the TV series, it can attract me to read it. It is okay for the time being, but the reading is very slow. I rarely follow it unless I can't help it. This book is not up to the standard, but I can recommend it.

The writing is very good, I started chasing the cute little hare.

After reading it, I don't have much to say, the writing is pretty good. Others. . . . . So be it. Writing a book is not easy, five stars encourage you! Many female literary yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This book is more complete. This is the smoothest book I have read in a while. Good. It's hard to find without any poisonous points. I have watched a lot of martial arts and mixed martial arts, and many of them are illogical and confusing. Keep up the good work, author! Write well and don't collapse.

At present, I feel that this is the most rationally structured Yi Nian Guan Shan fanfic. The relationship between the characters is well handled, and the writing is also good. Come on

Overall, it's good. The main reason is that the protagonist is well portrayed. And so far, this harem novel has not been written as a stallion novel. The emotional progression is okay, which is considered very good.

Well written, cheers!