A Thought: Reborn as Li Tongguang in the Womb, I Change My Name and Fate

It's absolutely wonderful! The writing is mature, the pacing is excellent, and it's just the right pace.

Keep it up, author! It's really well-written. Even though there are multiple female leads, it doesn't feel like the kind of lecherous guy who's never seen a woman before. Keep it up! 👍👍👍 The beginning was quite good, but it got increasingly weak towards the end. This is supposed to be a collection of celestial phenomena, so why is the plot moving so slowly?

It's really easy to write, but the timeline is a bit too early. You could consider having the characters accumulate their strength before the main storyline to speed things up a bit.

I've heard from many people that the main characters all died in the ending of "A Thought Through the Mountains," so I haven't watched the TV series. However, this book is quite well-written. Even without watching the TV series, it still managed to keep me reading. It's okay for now, but the updates are very slow. I rarely follow the story unless I can't resist, and this book doesn't quite reach that point. But I can still recommend it.

The writing is excellent; I've been following it since the story of the adorable little wild rabbit.

Finished reading it. Nothing much to say, the writing is pretty good. As for the rest... That's it. Writing a book isn't easy, five stars for encouragement! Multiple female characters, so great!!!

I've read more of this book. It's the smoothest book I've read in a while. It's good. It's already quite remarkable that it doesn't have any major flaws. I've read many other martial arts and crossover novels, and many of them have illogical plots and are just a mess. Author, keep up the good work! Write well, don't let it fall apart.

This is currently the most logically structured fanfic of "A Thought Through the Mountains," with well-handled character relationships and good writing. Keep it up!

Overall, it's pretty good. The main character is well-developed, and so far, this harem story hasn't turned into a typical harem novel. The emotional progression is also quite good, which is excellent.

Well written, keep it up!