The Finest in the Mortal World: An Immortal Swordsman Amidst the Red Dust

Be more generous with your own book

I guess half and half, because the general content is very similar to Xue Zhong, but it also has the author's own ideas. Putting aside the details, it's generally good. Keep up the good work, author.

Regarding this novel, I would like to make a simple and objective comment: As for this novel written by the author for the first time, first of all, I think it is quite outstanding, whether it is writing style, plot, imagination, character creation, emotional lines, etc. 1. Writing style. I think the writing style of this article is relatively good. Take the section about giving fireworks to lovers as an example. One is that it has a sense of imagery, and the other is that it is imaginative. Looking at other paragraphs, there are some humorous parts that are well written, making people laugh and laugh, and are not stiff. I think this is one of the better points in the male channel compared to the female channel. 2. Plot. The plot is still relatively new, and the rhythm can be controlled in the early stage without dragging on. However, towards the end, I think some details can be added appropriately to make it more balanced. When it finally ends, you can also follow up some plots, which can be considered more complete. Of course, there are some plots that I think are very novel, such as the protagonist losing his swordsmanship, etc. Of course, there are still some minor flaws, such as the ending saying that there is no more heaven in the world, which is remarkable, including the early stage, during the dynasty, the protagonist killed a lot of people, which is not bad (because sometimes empty talk can make people feel procrastinating and boring), but it makes people feel more or less inappropriate. After all, power is not something that can be solved once and for all by killing a few people. 3. Imagination. I quite agree with the author on this point. For example, it is still the paragraph about the moon and fireworks. I have to admit that this paragraph is very romantic. Of course imagination can also be said about the plot, and I certainly agree with it. 4. Character creation. The characters are three-dimensional, rich, and different. There is a context for many characters, rather than just passing by. First, the shaping of the protagonist. Very specific, image (but I think it can be more three-dimensional and multi-faceted, such as humor, etc.). Second, the creation of secondary characters. I can only say that some are very complete, such as the demons trying to resurrect their relatives. It seems that everyone has their own purpose, and these purposes are reasonable and not clichéd like world domination. However, sometimes secondary characters are also ignored. For example, there is no description of the life experience, background, beginning, etc. Of the heroine, Qian Yuanzi, etc. (This kind of narrative should not be too much, it is best to cover it in a few strokes, otherwise it will appear procrastinating) 5. Emotional lines, I won't say much about this. I'm not the kind of person who likes to read emotional lines, so this book doesn't have too many emotional lines and it suits my taste. So far, but every sentence is full of love. The above are only personal views and opinions.

Author, you must have read too many articles.

Finally another book that I can read from beginning to end. Come on

So fast, so is Xiao Tao

I've looked through the ones I've finished, and there are so few of them. I basically keep chasing them and then take them off the shelf and stop updating them. There are so many complete ones, so keep up the good work.

This book is still okay and quite interesting.

The more I watch it, the better it gets, although the ending is a bit hasty. The mortal swordsman was born in the mortal world and returns to the mortal world.

Very good, worth seeing