A Scumbag? I Just Want to Fall in Love!

After reading half of it, overall the level is pretty good, in line with my expectations, and the writing style is also very unrestrained. It's hard to imagine Sister Jellybean that you can write so many words that I find difficult to say. It can be said that I am shy but love to read. In addition, the overall quality is also very comfortable. The character of the protagonist is very interesting. Compared with the previous work, maybe this book The book is more in line with the author's personality. I hope that I can continue to work hard in the future, output better content, stand up the image of the main characters, and avoid flattening the characters due to too much coverage. Compared with the previous book, it is recommended to reduce the number of characters, write the characters three-dimensionally, and focus on the key points [send heart] [send heart]. Finally, sister, we love you🥰🥰

I rarely comment, but this one is really good-looking. The two female protagonists so far are well portrayed. I don't know if there will be another female protagonist in the future. I hope to maintain this quality and not pursue quantity. I have read other rebirth novels and I almost feel sick to my stomach after reading multiple female protagonists. Usually one is going abroad and the other is accompanying. A person who is pregnant and has a baby is really convinced. She tortures her heart just for the sake of hurting her heart. Byd has been reborn and she can't feel happy. It's really terrible for those who come to read refreshing articles to see this. I hope the author can have his own ideas and not follow the same template as other rebirth articles. I really can't stand it.

Sister Xiaoneng [blowing kiss] Support, support! Blindly guess the harem novel by reading the title of the book! It's hard to come back from the peak of the first book. . Sister Xiaoneng also needs to learn and make progress. The writing style is very similar to that of a capable sister. Well. Hope the score can go up. Come on

Just like the previous book, it is very logical and makes people unable to stop reading it.

Five-star praise is an encouragement. Although I don't think it's particularly good-looking, the five-star level is more than enough. Personally, I think it's still a bit lacking in character creation. Shen Shijiu's character is a bit like Feng Nanshu from Who's in Love Again? You can refer to it more. Personally, I think we can write more psychological descriptions from Shen Shijiu's perspective. It's a bit like Shen Qingning from Force Me to Rebirth, and you can also refer to it. I feel that the characters of the two heroines are good, but the characters themselves are not established. In terms of characterization, they are weaker than Xiao Xiaoyu in the previous work, and the scenes are a bit less, but maybe the author didn't write many words. Of course, this is all my personal opinion.

After watching it for two hours, I gave it a try. The plot is compact, the heroine has a distinct personality, and there are no shortage of interesting features in the novel. There is not a single nerve-wracking operation that makes your blood pressure high. I highly recommend [KISS]

As good looking as ever, and even better. I got my driver's license.

Although the plot is a relatively old-fashioned type of reborn business to make money and pick up girls, the author of the same plot writes it very smoothly and humorously without making people feel bored or embarrassed. It makes people keep reading. The writing is really good and is one of the better ones in Tomato [Chigua] [Like]

I have read all of the last book and it is really good. I am still following this one and it feels very good! ! !

It's a very good book on Tomato. The author has a strong awareness of lightning protection, and the whole text is not depressing or thunderous, which makes me, a defensive player, feel comfortable reading it. The characters are also very rich, and I particularly like the character Shen Shijiu. The shortcomings are also obvious, but they are not big problems. First, some unnecessary characters take up too much presence, which is a bit annoying, such as Meng Ting and the cheater. Second, there are some small flaws in the sentences, but the rest are not big problems. All in all, I think this novel is considered a masterpiece on Tomato.