The Male-Oriented Master’s Beloved Disciples

I want to see you always suffer [shy]

As a reminder, the story line of this book is very long and slow. The main text is clear/water, and the attack and reception are ominous. After all the disciples come out and start writing the extras, I can cook some more🥩 for everyone to taste. I myself have an attack/reception/direction, but it doesn't matter, I will accurately/accurately/throw/feed according to the situation! Also, I haven't read/written in many years, and I don't know what good books are like nowadays. This one is purely for practicing writing (the previous ones don't count, either the outline is broken, or the brain is broken). You guys can just relax and have fun, you can raise them more. I don't care what their debut is, what data they have, or whether they are popular or not. I am no longer a professional coder. (The words at the end of the previous chapter are just emotions! Emotions!) (I posted this three days ago, but the result was that I failed. I really accepted it!) I was really convinced. I spent most of the night chewing on words and finally succeeded. Look at my poor "/". I'm afraid I'm just adding it. Although it's for leisure and entertainment, I hope you can give me some suggestions when accepting my plot, and accept it with an open mind! (I'm really looking forward to someone caring about my settings. The plot is too confusing, and the settings are too annoying. I will definitely modify any settings except the character settings no less than eight times [crying] [crying] [crying])

Apart from the fact that the plot is too slow, there are no other shortcomings, and the direction is indeed completely male-oriented. Belongs to... The heart-throb type, but I want to watch Total Attack✔[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Show me the general attack, or I'm going to cause trouble!

It's well written. I just like to watch male videos with love lines between two men, or two men's stories that are very similar to male videos. Hahaha, it's pretty cool to upgrade the flow [I learned it]. However, the plot is indeed a bit thin, and so is the love line. They are all very similar to the redemption and companionship between master and apprentice. , Maybe because there are too many people, it is difficult to portray each one deeply and reasonably, and the age is indeed set too young at the beginning. It is really hard to watch a child in his early ten years who is in love [face covering] This is too fast to accept, they are still children. QAQ makes Feng Ci have a scumbag feeling in the article about raising children, raising husbands and running a harem. If he were not the protagonist, I would say he is a scumbag. [Hold face][Hold face] However, he is still a qualified heartthrob... In fact, at first I thought he would be the kind of Qing Leng Gong (Shou) who is unmoved and tortures his disciples until they are adults and then starts the love-hate entanglement... In the end, it really seems like the hesitant and carefree scumbag Gong reached the np ending in order not to hurt someone, although the ending of him who insists on 1v1 does not look good qvq Anyway, I love this book so much, and I'm looking forward to the plot in the future. Hehehe, there will also be extra chapters. Big boost for the author! [Send heart][Send heart]

The psychological description of the characters is delicate and vivid. The content is rich and very interesting. The plot development seems a bit slow (looking forward to the extra (*^o^*)) However, my great admiration for the author is like the water of the Yellow River flowing endlessly and out of control. Hope there will be more updates

I have been looking for this type of book for a long time, and I always felt a little dissatisfied after reading other books. However, this one is completely in line with my imagination. It is the trend of male comics but amplifies the feelings. It is really good. It simply satisfies the desire of people who like to read this type of book.

Author Author I love you 😘 It's so beautiful [I almost cried] I hope to write more books of this type in the future! The hero has a brain! The daily interactions between master and apprentice are so cool! ! ! [Shy] The writing is great! Author, I am so scared that after reading this book, how will I live without your books again! [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Have mercy on me! Write more of this type [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I will always follow the author greatly I can't say enough about my love for you! Love you author! [Blowing kiss]

Overall it's pretty good. The writing is very good in some places, but a bit messy in other places. I feel that my wife's writing style is very unstable. The plot is okay, a bit cliche, but considering the label, it's okay. Secondly, the interaction with my wife was very positive and made me feel relaxed and comfortable. It's just not very attractive in the early stages, which is a pity.

It's not enough to watch. Oh my god, I'm getting angry! [Crying] I really like this kind of writing

Hey, it's very exciting when multiple people compete for one person.