The Era of Loot Boxes: I Can Choose My Cheat

So far, the setting is very interesting, and there is no vulgar plot, but this new forbidden magic feels a little bit bad, especially if others eat the food made by the protagonist and fall in love with him! ! I was a seedling when I chased him, and I saw Chapter 39

There are so many weird treasure chests and magical objects. It can be said that the impact of too rapid growth in strength on the plot and readers' interest in reading is basically avoided. Therefore, I feel that the protagonist's strength is still growing too slowly. Not to mention completely getting rid of the embarrassing situation of being used as a pawn by others, at least he should have a stable trump card that is completely his own and unknown to others. Otherwise, the protagonist can make a comeback even if he is cheated. Otherwise, readers will not be able to fully experience the refreshing feeling of opening the box.

I have suggested all the suggestions. Whether you can grasp it depends on you. I read other people's evaluations. It has nothing to do with the fact that the setting of your book is very good. It is true. But if you continue to write like this, I can only say that according to my experience of using Tomato for three years, at most you are just a cake taker. This cake is too big for you to eat. There are many pipeline authors of Tomato, many of whom are better at writing than you.

It's not bad, the setting is quite interesting, the language about fighting monsters is a bit nonsensical, but the emotional scenes are really flawed, and the life path is not clear. I thought it was good in the middle part where I wanted to transfer to a college, but it stopped abruptly, and I don't know where the protagonist wants to go in the future. Overall, it has some minor flaws but is pretty good.

It's really good. I thought it was the old routine of opening treasure chests. It's very novel.

The content is novel and the logic is clear, I hope it will continue to be The content is too short, so I'll give it a 4⭐️ to encourage you. I hope this novel will have a beginning and an end.

Although I scolded me in various ways, I have to say that the logic in it is still much better than other books [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering]

I didn't feel any better after seeing the 8th picture. I'll give you a good review.

It's a very interesting novel. The writing is acceptable and it's pretty. It would be great if the protagonist could become a little lolita.

It looks good, but the world view is so big that it will collapse later.