After Succeeding in Cultivation, She Finally Transmigrated Back

The three views of the protagonist are well established, but the ending is too hasty and has pitfalls. The plot is very good, if the details are in place and linked together to become a novel, it will be perfect. And what happened to the childhood sweethearts at the beginning? Haven't you heard of her in so many years? What's going on since she left the sect? Also, what is the mentality of the former master? The former sect master knows that the heroine's cultivation is cultivated by himself. Her former master didn't teach her anything. How will she deal with that master? These questions, etc. I hope to expand.

Dear readers (﹡ˆoˆ﹡), many of the settings in this fairy tale are made by the author (｡>∀<｡), please don't go into details! The author is a novice at writing, please feel free to comment, thank you very much o((*^▽^*))o ! First give yourself a five-star review to encourage yourself∀. I wish everyone peace, joy and success! ♡♥(.´▽`.)♥♡

The language is vivid and the emotions are sincere. It is an excellent piece of writing! The novel is full of a relaxed and humorous atmosphere, showing vivid and interesting scenes of sect life through interactions and dialogues between characters. Let me use the chapter on drunken chaos as an example to analyze the characteristics of this book. Vivid character creation: Each character has its own unique personality and characteristics, such as Xie Jing's straightforwardness, Cheng Cheng's honesty, Lu Jinghong's anger, etc., Making the story more lively and interesting. Especially Xie Jing's words and deeds are both bold and uninhibited, but also reveal a hint of cuteness, which is very attractive. The plot is cleverly set up: through a series of small events and dialogues, the development of the story is cleverly advanced, while showing the relationships and personalities of the characters. For example, Xie Jing's "like" for the disciple named Qian is actually a kind of teasing and ridicule. This reversal adds to the interest of the story. The language is humorous and witty: The author's language style is humorous and witty, and he is good at using various rhetorical techniques and colloquial expressions to make the story more down-to-earth and easy to understand. At the same time, some exaggerated and humorous descriptions are also used to increase the comedy effect of the story. Detailed description of the scene: The author describes the life of the sect in great detail, covering everything from the buildings and facilities in the sect to the daily life and practice of the disciples. This kind of detailed description allows readers to have a deeper understanding of the sect's culture and lifestyle, adding to the sense of reality and immersion in the story. Sincere emotional expressions: Although the story is mainly humorous, there are also sincere emotional expressions. For example, Xie Jing's "like" for the disciple named Qian is actually a kind of appreciation and respect for the strong; Cheng Cheng's "kiss" for Lu Jinghong is an expression of friendship. These emotional elements make the story richer.

The author's writing style is warm and interesting, the plot of the story is exciting and reasonable, and the heroine's character is vividly depicted on the page, which makes people love it [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]. Thank you very much [like][like][like]

Author, I like you so much. I have been looking for this kind of article for a long time. I searched for it for 5 to 6 hours. I finally found this novel. Personally, I wanted to read the story of the heroine who was forced to travel through time and then worked hard to return home, but most of them were about the heroine of "The Lonely Star". When they entered the world of cultivating immortals, they no longer had any nostalgia for modern times, and gradually they forgot modern events and memories. Now I just want to read the story of fallen leaves returning to their roots. Thank you so much author There are other stories with this kind of story, but they are all abuse. I really dare not read them all. The elephants died in the end. I still like this author a lot. What you wrote doesn't sound like a sadistic article. Stories like rescue and growth stories are better looking. Love you love you love you love you I particularly like the heroine's personality. She will do whatever she doesn't want and she will scold her with her little mouth. So cool. To succeed, first go crazy

This imaginative time-travel romance not only has the charm of fantasy, but also has delicate emotions. Xie Jing is a very emotional protagonist. He is funny without losing love. It is worth reading. I have caught up with the latest chapter. The heroine's character of repaying kindness and her courage are very vivid and beautiful.

My imagination is wide open. I can travel through books to cultivate immortality. The story is fascinating and the characters are vivid.

It's so exciting, but I saw it too late. I fell in love with the protagonist's character [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The author is quite interesting [shy] and I like to read it. The plot is compact and has been added to the bookshelf. It is no exaggeration to say that this was the first time I watched it seriously [laughs]

Author, please come out and continue writing. Why is it over when we are only halfway through?