After Faking My Death and Losing My Memory, My Unhinged Disciple Turns Dark and Wants Me to Soothe Him

It's really beautiful which I didn't expect! (It may contain minor spoilers) I feel that this subject matter is really novel. It is completely unexpected. The author is really good at writing. It has a fantasy and urban feel. The world view is huge. What impressed me deeply is that the author wrote a lot of his own understanding of the way of heaven in this book. It is very profound because the way of heaven has always been relatively far and elusive to us. The author here not only allows the way of heaven to have its own consciousness. When we novices use "Heaven's disgust", there is also a kind of God loves the world. The greatest misfortune is that God has withdrawn his protection from man and is rejected by heaven. There is also a lot of emotion. It is very touching to often see the heroic spirit of our Chinese nation that is neither humble nor arrogant and never compromises. This book is well written and contains foreshadowing in many places. Finally, our emotional scenes were written very naturally, very sweet and not cruel. The whole book is still very complete. Worth seeing for everyone. Finally, I hope the author will not be discouraged. What he wrote is very, very good.

It's so beautiful, my goodness, the characters are so vivid, I really want to cry after reading it 😭 It's so beautiful, the flow of emotions and warmth are so natural and sweet, it's definitely a unique article that crosses modern times, the theme is unique, the sublimation is so deep, the concern for the common people is really kind, but there is kindness. News, there is no such thing as meal replacement www. It has a lot of imagination about the three-body problem, as well as philosophical and human thinking. I am so moved and like it when I see such a fairy tale in a tomato novel. There is no similar character and world view. Author, how do you want me to live? I have to go to school tomorrow. Wuwuwu

Why have I written so much and no one has read it? Is it because I stopped updating in the middle? () This kind of dual-male protagonist is quite to my liking, and so far it doesn't have any major negative points. But this kind of relatively long novel has a disadvantage for me. After I finish reading it, it will be put on the bookshelf to gather dust for a long time. When I pick it up again, I will be too lazy to read it again because I have forgotten about it. Anyway, let's give it a five-star rating first. Ps: I want to read a cool article about restoring my cultivation level and becoming invincible😭

Overall, it's pretty good. I really like the master and his cute little apprentice. Maybe the article is not very long, so some parts are not well written, such as Li Fan's betrayal. Looking forward to the big new book

It's strange, such a beautiful article, the subject matter is incomparably novel, from the beginning to the end, the writing style is incomparable and excellent, the author's theory is also very good, the setting of scientific cultivation of immortality is simply wonderful! Why is no one watching? ! Wow, I must recommend this! ! Show them all to me! ! !

When will Master regain his strength? I have been waiting and looking forward to their reactions when the master regains his memory and strength. After the master regains his strength, he will not be so depressed and unable to do anything! Sit and wait, author, hungry, rice

It does need to be polished in the early stage. Some plot logic and character communication are not natural and mature enough. At the same time, it is too naive when it comes to machinations. The character arc portrayal of the supporting characters is not full enough. But overall the pace is not sluggish. The plot setting is ups and downs. The setting is novel and not cliche. The writing is also above average on Tomato. In any case, the score should not be only 6.8. I hope everyone will read this book more. After reading the whole book, I found some logical flaws and compiled some ideas that can be improved. If the author is interested, you can communicate with me. I used to be an online author and have some experience in this area for reference. On the other hand, I think the author is too cute and I want to get to know her. Owq. Every time I see a request for a book review and have some random thoughts, I feel soft-hearted... I don't know if the author will see this review, but she is really too cute and I want to get to know her. . Closer to home, I still want to say that this is really a book that has been seriously underestimated. The fighting scenes and the construction of the big world view have their own set of ideas. It can be said that the big plot is quite complete and not rushed. This is often an ability that most authors in Persimmon do not have. If the flaws cannot be concealed, it should not be 6.8 In any case... One more thing... Baby Chenzang, you are so cute...

It's a good-looking and novel story. At first, I thought it was an ordinary story about a disciple who traveled back in time to modern times. But I didn't expect that the spiritual energy of reality would revive later, and it would be very interesting to transform into a modern city and cultivate immortality. Here is a suggestion for the author: It is best to indicate in the copy or at the beginning of the article that you traveled to modern times and then regained your spiritual energy. Otherwise, some people may think that this is a book about cultivating immortals.

It's indescribably beautiful. I can't imagine how it got such a low rating. There may be one or two logical flaws, but it's okay. It doesn't stop it from being an excellent work. Where can I find such an urban novel about two powerful people cultivating immortality that combines all kinds of things together?

I came across a good book in the middle of the night and stayed up until after three o'clock. It received five-star reviews. The author's writing style is very humorous. I often laughed while reading it! There is a question I must ask you. Is Ah Fan the ceiling of combat power? Right? It must be! Just blow it up! Crush everyone! (Except Master)