Harry Potter: Slytherin's White Dark Lord

The writing is very good. I really like this setting. Gloria truly shows from all aspects that she is the heir of Slytherin who has received pure-blood education for more than ten years. It's super awesome👍🏻

It's very interesting. I like the plot of the little dragon being pampered. It's all about Draco. Why must he experience failure and darkness? Of course he has to support such a beautiful little prince.

This is my favorite HP fanfic so far First of all, the heroine is very strong. This is a novel written entirely around the heroine. Even though Draco is a popular character, Draco has not changed the protagonist's center. It can be seen that the heroine's fighting strength, family background, personality and behavior have been carefully designed. She is a Slytherin in the true sense, a complete, independent and charming character. Next is the world view. I originally thought that the surname Slytherin was just created for the sake of writing, but I didn't expect it to be expanded into a complete world view, and it is not obtrusive. It even optimized the contradictions such as "Wizards and Muggles" that are in the original work but many people have not paid attention to. It can be seen that the author has done in-depth research on the original work. Then there is the plot. Almost all the plot regrets of the original work have been perfectly made up for in this book, and they are not inconsistent. Even the butterfly effect caused by changing the original work is very natural, with almost no abruptness and will not make people feel weird. The author is definitely very familiar with the original work. I want to focus on the emotional line. This fanfic will not change Draco's character and behavior without authorization. It is not OOC at all. He has naturally changed due to the appearance of the heroine in the text, but his character background has not changed at all. It is very, very good. The lonely Xiaolong repairing the disappearing cabinet alone makes people hope that a heroine will really appear to love him. , The emotional line is also very interesting. God knows how much I like the setting of love at first sight. The arrogant Draco is always the favorite of the heroine. The ambiguous period in the early stage is simply invincible [Adoration]. In the later stage, because of the plot, the emotional drama is a bit less (this is my only dissatisfaction hhh). I really like it when Astronomy Tower expresses his sincerity and makes up after quarrels many times. Kech's emotional line is also very good. Hermione is good at everything but has a bad eye for men. The two men she likes are Lockhart and Ron. Needless to say, Lockhart is a liar professor. In domestic entertainment, he is an old man whose crazy character design is in ruins. Ron is very good but he is not suitable for Hermione. My understanding has always been Most of them are friends, and Krum is particularly good. Although he was born in pure blood and studied at Durmstrang, which only accepts pure blood, and is surrounded by the concept of pure blood supremacy, he did not discriminate against Hermione who was born as a Muggle. He could see Hermione's shining advantages and be attracted by them even after they had not known each other for a long time. Only such a man is worthy of Hermione. Finally, every character has no OOC, and many of the characterizations are deviated from the impression given to me by the movie (I watched the movie first when I was a child, so there are many impressions caused by the actors' interpretations, which are somewhat different from the original work). Apart from the heroine and Draco, my favorite is Harry. Many of his habits are very cute and very cute. It is in line with the characteristics of Gryffindor. What I remember most is that he loves to pull his hair. Hahaha, it directly broke my early impression of Harry in the movie. It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing this book. He has a deep research on the original work, and the writing is very smooth and will not make people look too dramatic. 🍅 There are not many authors who can do this.

This setting is very good. The heroine has her own ideas. She doesn't just agree with the savior or Malfoy. I like such an independent and sober heroine.

It's really beautifully written! There are no disadvantages except a little less!

This is the first time I've seen an amazing Mary Sue fanfic! The setting of the heroine is indeed very Mary Sue. The special identity of the descendant of Slytherin, the three snakes, the special space, multiple foreign languages, the powerful spell ability that can rival the teacher in the second grade, and the new world space belonging to wizards are all outrageous. However, the plot of the heroine and Draco is well integrated with the original text. It does not completely deviate from the original work, nor is it a 1:1 retelling of the original content that is too confusing to watch. Although the scene is inevitable, it still does not take too much of the adventure scenes that the trio, especially Harry, deserves, but opens up some new stories that run on the same track as the original work. It can be said that it is similar to increasing the height of vision and the amount of information provided to Harry (meaning very little, little Harry still likes to be kept in the dark) and directly supporting Dumbledore's strong backing. Slytherin's tough character and Mary Sue's magical ability have saved many of the regrets of the original work. It is equivalent to going through the original work again from the second grade. The heroine's character is neither too friendly nor too mean. The transformation of the Malfoy family finally matches the pursuit of glory and ambition of Slytherin House, a model of Slytherin.

I really like this setting. The descriptions of the female protagonist and the male protagonist are very full. The author's literary talent is very good. I hope you will continue to work hard [top post] It's so well written, why isn't it popular [punch out][punch out][punch out]

I have read many HP Draco fanfics, and this one is the most logical and well-written. It is the only one I have finished reading. The story has a beginning and an end, the relationship between the heroine and Draco is sweet and not boring, the main plot is logical and not too abrupt, and everyone who would have died in the original movie survived. Draco doesn't have OOC, but he's still the same noble and easy-going young man. This is really good. Many HP articles feel like they are trying to tame the young master, with a Mudblood getting angry at Draco and sulking into submission. In this article, the heroine will explain to Draco the origin of the mudblood. Draco is just a spoiled young master. He has a brain and can think. He is not a brainless person who just stops saying this word because the heroine in the book is angry. Isn't this really an obedience test? Where do you put the Malfoy noble bloodline? Draco and the heroine respect each other and understand each other, and they will express their emotional doubts clearly, which is really comfortable to watch. I really recommend it as a must-read. If you don't believe me, you can read the reviews of other fans on my homepage. They are all basically read until you can't stand it anymore, so you quit and comment.

Oh oh oh oh, I haven't seen such a good HP article for a long time. From my own review, the plot and characters are not broken. The heroine's character is the most satisfactory to me. She is the heir of Slytherin and her father is Regulus. Would the author please reveal a little bit about whether Nagini Credence, Ariana Aberforth, Grindelwald, Newt and other characters will appear? If I were to write about Credence and Ariana, I feel like it would be easy to collapse later on, so the one I'm looking forward to the most is Nagini. It feels like I haven't read it for a long time, and now that it's finished, I can only say that I read it in one go. Suddenly, I remembered my 1,500-word book introduction.

I highly recommend this episode. The heroine's surname is Slytherin. She is a great heroine. She is also very strong. She fell in love with Xiaolong. She really likes it. The writing is also very good. The heroine did not reveal her real name at first because of the protection magic. However, she was very strong and enrolled in the second grade. She let Harry and Ron be her carriages to school until she finally killed Fu. Old Demon is particularly exciting. I kept pushing for updates before it was finished. Now that it is suddenly finished, I feel a little uncomfortable. The sequels are also very interesting. The author has a great imagination, but I have never been able to clarify the idea of ​​the time turner (it has nothing to do with the author, but I feel that there is some logic that I can't understand)